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Vixen's Shadow
2009-08-26 . chapter 2
Kat: Is the entire story going to be told through reports? Seems kinda impersonal to me as a writing form but seems reasonable.
Vix: makes perfect sense... well if you know your game facts that is.
Kat: but one fact you made I have isues with: Angels-level don't normally have issues staying in one plane and I'm sure Joshua wouldn't have made a risky move like changing what reality he is in. I'm sure you know what I'm refering to...somewhat anyways.
Crys: sure is interesting to read though. Keep writing.
The Light Hidden in the Shadow
2009-08-16 . chapter 2
Wow. I'm totally speechless...this looks like it could be a real secret report! I eagerly await the rest of the story.
Inspiration of Imagination
2009-08-16 . chapter 2
I can't wait for the first chapter, (I hope it's longer than the reports), because obviously you put a LOT of thought into this!
I understand it perfectly, (okay, well, close enough), and I can't wait for this to begin. ^_^
Inspiration of Imagination
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Like where it's going so far.
Gonna add this to story alert.
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