Please let Tigerclaw end up with Bluestar

well, that was weird. but i liked when he said or the machine gun. again, a little too late to say this, but try making the chapters longer.

good. i dont think jaguarfang was an actual warrior in thunderclan. im a little late, but keep it up!

great story yuo should realy read Blustar's Prophcy

Been a while hmm? :) Glad your back, still love the story!Your Mousepaw timing seems a little off... but that's ok. Whatever works I guess. Keep writing!

uhh...wat green button?

but anyway, its a good plot, but ur writing needs a little work.

I felt this could be more interesting.

nice

this story is AWESOME! don't delete! update soon!

ivyleaf

Your story is pretty good... I think it needs some editing, there are some grammer mistakes, and the author's notes in the middle chapters bugged me... but this was a good story!

I like it!

Hey! Thanks so much 4 the reviews on my story, and now I'm here 2 review yours, yay! XD

so yes, I like the idea of the story, and you got a good sense of what kind of feelings Tigerstar was starting 2 feel when Goldenflower had her kits. If you want some tips, I suggest that maybe you delve deeper into those emotions. Don't be afraid to take what the character's feeling/experiencing to the next level. I can tell you get a start to this, but you have to be willing to take the time to experience what the character's feeling, that way you can convey it to your readers! But you have some nice similes at points, so good job :)

Keep writing! 3

Really good story. I think you described his pain very realistically. I am starting to feel bad for tigerclaw.

very nice... short (i promise that is the last time i will ever say it again!) Who are the kits? Does *someone* murder them?

i read it! i say it's awesome! this is really good, i feel so bad for Tigerclaw, u've changed him into such a good main character

This excellent. ravenpaw rippleclaws son, right? keep going cuz i favorited and iz watching this.