|Reviews for Tigerpaw's Heartache|
| Guest 12/15/12 . chapter 14
Please let Tigerclaw end up with Bluestar
| DREAMFeathersong 8/20/11 . chapter 6
well, that was weird. but i liked when he said or the machine gun. again, a little too late to say this, but try making the chapters longer.
| DREAMFeathersong 8/19/11 . chapter 3
good. i dont think jaguarfang was an actual warrior in thunderclan. im a little late, but keep it up!
| Guest 5/16/11 . chapter 7
great story yuo should realy read Blustar's Prophcy
| Almond of the Stars 5/15/11 . chapter 13
Been a while hmm? :) Glad your back, still love the story!Your Mousepaw timing seems a little off... but that's ok. Whatever works I guess. Keep writing!
| DREAMFeathersong 10/20/10 . chapter 12
uhh...wat green button?
but anyway, its a good plot, but ur writing needs a little work.
| WolfheartX 2/27/10 . chapter 12
I felt this could be more interesting.
| swiftflower hhh 1/6/10 . chapter 11
| xxSuigintouLovexx 11/9/09 . chapter 12
this story is AWESOME! don't delete! update soon!
| Aurora Blackwood 11/9/09 . chapter 12
Your story is pretty good... I think it needs some editing, there are some grammer mistakes, and the author's notes in the middle chapters bugged me... but this was a good story!
I like it!
| Lilac Lenalee 11/4/09 . chapter 12
Hey! Thanks so much 4 the reviews on my story, and now I'm here 2 review yours, yay! XD
so yes, I like the idea of the story, and you got a good sense of what kind of feelings Tigerstar was starting 2 feel when Goldenflower had her kits. If you want some tips, I suggest that maybe you delve deeper into those emotions. Don't be afraid to take what the character's feeling/experiencing to the next level. I can tell you get a start to this, but you have to be willing to take the time to experience what the character's feeling, that way you can convey it to your readers! But you have some nice similes at points, so good job :)
Keep writing! 3
| Samantha0903 11/3/09 . chapter 12
Really good story. I think you described his pain very realistically. I am starting to feel bad for tigerclaw.
| Almond of the Stars 11/3/09 . chapter 12
very nice... short (i promise that is the last time i will ever say it again!) Who are the kits? Does *someone* murder them?
| Almond of the Stars 10/27/09 . chapter 11
i read it! i say it's awesome! this is really good, i feel so bad for Tigerclaw, u've changed him into such a good main character
| Piemaster 10/25/09 . chapter 11
This excellent. ravenpaw rippleclaws son, right? keep going cuz i favorited and iz watching this.