 Himig 2009-12-17 . chapter 3wtf
A narration chapter.
Lame.
You know this kinds of chapter, episodes, parts - is one of the worst kinds a fan would think of! |
 Anime-StarWars-fan-zach 2009-12-16 . chapter 3Well, this answers my question about the American continents. Great chapter! Pretty interesting, it is. A different power in place of the European Union, and a completely new one on the American and African continents. Pretty interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next! Have a Merry Christmas! |
 anja-chan 2009-12-15 . chapter 3That was quite an impressive interlude and really fun to read. I am such a literature/history nut that it was just as much fun as the usual story. I like how well you blended history with Code Geass and were able to build a solid history of what happened in regards to social, political, and economic ideas. Fabulous job.
There were just a few typos that I caught that are easily fixed:
"...the time of Julius Caesar on. Empire’s size..." Perhaps 'The Empire's size?'
"...Charles Di Brittania. in closing weeks..." I'm thinking that should be a comma and your missing a 'the' somewhere again.
Anyway, happy holidays and have fun abroad. We'll be waiting to hear from you when you return. |
 Obsessive Child 2009-12-15 . chapter 3Since Lelouch's reaction seems a little off... would the person who murdered Charles Di Brittainia possibly be Euphie or Nunnally? |
 Lelouch of Britannia 2009-12-15 . chapter 3I am interested but curious. Is Lelouch's geas the same as it was or is it something new. If it is the same then will Lelouch use his geass to put himself in a postion of pwer within the Japan army or create his own army and crush both? Knowing how this is going putting himself in a postion of power would be the best bet. |
 Somebodylost 2009-12-15 . chapter 3Awesome dude.
I can see how you applied your business degree... the economical somethings...
Tenchu? Wrath of Heaven?
Eowyn? Lord of the Rings?
Fukuyama? Jun Fukuyama (know him?)?
History always bores me, but this managed to fascinate me.
You wove and twisted fact and fiction into a beautiful tapestry. Nice.
All in all, it sounds like a legit historical record (even with some book/game references... nice). Like, all of the stuff in here really really really happened.
Keep up the awesomeness!
Merry Christmas, Come back safe, God Bless. Happy New Year! |
 SharinganUserX 2009-12-15 . chapter 3nice history, love it .. especially well thought out AU's |
 Harrie 2009-12-09 . chapter 1I've been a fan of your works for a while and just recently started watching Code Geass, I've finished the first season and started the second.
I look forward to seeing where you take this. |
 Anave Lipad 2009-12-06 . chapter 2Wow outstanding. I especially love characters' confrontations. Very well-written. |
 just-oneofthe-reader 2009-12-05 . chapter 2this story greatly interests me.. switching places og Suzaku and Lelouch are really a thing in my mind.. you're story is great i really like it!
I was wondering if Suzaku would be Zero?
What side would Kallen be?
How did CC get to Lelouch?
Would the characters have the same sides?
I guess Euphy is a test subject of some sort.. since CC said they were both like the same and not the same...
This story really is good.. I hope you'll update soon.. |
 College Fool 2009-12-04 . chapter 1This story has great promise. I've read your other works, and I think it's telling that you have a good track of completing your more recent stories, and they are all exceptional.
Good pacing, few, if any, grammatical errors, a good balance of dialogue, action, and description to keep the story moving...
A few stiff puns here and there, but nothing unforgivable.
Look forward to more, of course. It sounds like you have this planned out, which is good. |
 2stupid 2009-12-04 . chapter 2So, apparently VV somehow gave Euphy his Code? That or she was just in the wrong place at the wrong time or something and VV's out there planning revenge. It seems like something he would do, not to mention the whole premise of a three-sided war...
Hooray for Code Geass: making us guess, even when they're explaining stuff. |
 Anime-StarWars-fan-zach 2009-12-01 . chapter 2Great chapter! Glad to see another update. I eagerly await the next chapter! |
 AmeKage 2009-11-30 . chapter 2I'm very impressed. Your writing is amazing, definitely way above fanfiction level.
Write a book. I will buy it.
I'm not, however, entirely sure about the switch you did with the whole story. You're trying to make the whole thing opposite, while still keeping true to the characters, which is great. I applaud you.
But, some things I am confused about. Such as:
Why is Suzaku still the Prince of Japan? Shouldn't he be exiled, like Lelouch was?
Is Lelouch still going to be Zero, or will Suzaku? Will there be a Zero?
In the original, Suzaku was trying to change Brittannia from the inside, so how is Lelouch going to do that with Japan? So far, it doesn't fit.
And, is Kallen going to be to Lelouch, like how Euphie was to Suzaku in the original?
And where is Kallen? Is she going to call herself Japanese or Brittanian?
et cetera.
I'm sure you'll explain things when you get there. But then, this is fanfiction. People sometimes start really great things, and never finish.
It kills me.
T-T
Sorry for the rant, it was really, really great! |
 Somebodylost 2009-11-30 . chapter 2Awesome as ever. Love the plot twists (but you still patterned them in a way similar to episode 1, season 1).
The characterization of the characters now tend to make the story unpredictable, and you made some do-gooders in the original CG be bad-** (and vice versa) to release their other sides. Cool.
You killed Euphie? Not betting on that much.
Milly as a maid. HA. She exchanged roles with Sayoko. Speaking of which... where is she?
I know that you'll answer our questions at the next chapter. Please keep up the awesomeness.
(^_^) |