Haha this was a great read. Tomoyo is one frightening person. Good luck Kurogane. Of course I like these two together a lot so no matter what happens Kurogane will just have to handle it.

aha~ I always love Kurogane to be paired up with Tomoyo... I like the fic especially the part when Tomoyo thinks of Kurogane as her left hand, so sweet!

great work! keep on writting, :D

lol - she was nine? poor porr kuro-pon

I actually did laugh out loud while reading it, not so good when you're sneaking on the internet while at work (*shifty eyes*). I really liked that, I kinda felt bad for Kurogane at the end, but ah well. XD Very nice work, was strong the whole way through!

Cute, except for the fact that Kurogane doesn't mean "black horse" - it actually means iron. Kuro does mean black, but gane has no direct translation, and there's the fact that kuro is a noun, not an adjective (kuroi is the adjective form).

Still, cute, so I'll fav. :)

XD That was cute and funny all at once! We must Keep KuroxTomoyo alive! Huzzah! XXD

Very nice Sheo.

I haven't read Tsubasa Chronicle, but the ending of this is Awesome.