So sad yet captivating ;_;

Wow...this is exactly why I don't read tragedies, they're just to damn depressing.

But, this one was very beautiful. I loved how you cataloged Shizuru's last moments day by day. Rawr! I hated how Natsuki was together with Takeda. Natsuki's last actions for Shizuru although sweet, it makes me wonder if she really meant it or was it just pity. Ahh, I need to stop being a pessimist about this but this is one of the few stories that make me angry at how Natsuki acts.

Really liked this though, great job :D

*sniff*
This was so sad, but in a way it was just so sweet there at the end. Good job.
I think I'm going to go find a happy ShizNat now... *sniff*

That was... incredibly well done. I cried at the end... for it was so sad.


Cute, sad, but the love was returned.
(Oh dear. I almost feel sad for Takeda... not really xD)

I loved it.
Faved. ^^

Oh No!!So sad!!

Oh Krap..I loved..cut..ShizNat is amazing!!Good job men!

how tragic... poor Shizuru

It was a sad but beautiful piece ^^

how sad! *wipes tears*
Thanks for sharing.

OMG! This was so good that I had to Subscribe and Add you to Favs!! yesh all the checkbox have checks XD your writting is amazing! but GAH! omg! Shizuru dying at the end though expected made me cry *wipe wipe*

aww! very sad...probably now i'm crying but luckily i hold back my tears...this story was great! i love sad stories!!
the way it's written was great!
the last part made my heart to feel so much sadness...
when shizuru is going to say it, i felt angry for natsuki..it her fault, she doesn't show shizuru how much she love her when shizuru need her then she only show it when shizuru is going to die..

This story is really amazing, the way it's written is great, I don't usually read trgedies but this one definitly makes it to one of my favourites. It's strange or me to cry, but at the last part I couldn't stop a tear to run down my face. You did a pretty good job!

I'm so sad,it's seem I lost my beloved one,too.
The death of Shizuru,I never want to know,unless she'd die in Natsuki's arms who she love the most.
I'm sorry that I can't explain it how I feel,but see my eyes soaked with tear now.!

Beautiful.

I must say that this story was terrific. I enjoyed all the way through and I reacted strongly to many of the scenes, many of the emotions. I don't think I've read a story on Fanfiction that was this good in years. Yes, years. I'm not exaggerating.

What made this story so spectacular was the tragedy of this situation. When I first read of the Shizuru's plight, I couldn't help but cringe. It was a shock to me and you hid it quite well.

I'm so glad that I read this. When I read the summary, I thought I was going to read something just like anything else. I am thankful that you took a different route for the first time in a long time.

However, you should make a habit of re-reading your stories. I noted a few grammatical mistakes (who doesn't, eh?) as I was reading. Though your grammar was good compared to others I've seen, I suggest you self-edit your things. Other than that, this was a brilliant story. Everyone's characters were in-character and the slow escalation to the climax was wonderfully executed. Congratulations.

I had a really hard time reading this: but thats because I couldnt stop crying D;
No offense to your fantastic work, but if I knew Shizuru was gonna die, I wouldnt have read it XD
But in a sense, it was worth the read.
It was beautifully written and held a lot of emotion.
Your first Mai-HiME fic, eh?
Well you did excellent. No, beyond excellent.
Please write more fics, you're very good at it.

*Crying* That was beautifully wriiten! It was sad but had a bittersweet ending. I loved it! T~T