| Reviews for The Taming of the Brat |
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ENZIO 1/28/10 . chapter 4You should really write some more with these characters, I think you do a good job with the different personalities and the interaction's they have with each other. |
Nausicaa of the Spirits 1/28/10 . chapter 4Coraline 3's line at the end was hilarious. Nice job! |
A Writer With Mixed Interests 1/27/10 . chapter 4Uh-oh, Coraline 2 was good at first then she turned bad again. Again, PLEASE make a sequel, if you can! :D I love it! :D Poor Coraline 2...for once. :D Well, as all the Russians say... Dasvidanya! *Queen Coraline* :D |
Wormtail96 1/27/10 . chapter 4A delicious ending indeed! It looks like all the daughters, with the exception of Coraline 3 got a telling off at some point. Also, to answer Queen Coraline of Madness' review, I would be MORE than happy for you to use my characters again if you a future story if you wish. You have my full permission. I especially liked the way you used my characters. They, and the Beldam were believable and expressed their emotionals like ordinary people. Also, just to let you know, I'm posting up the next chapter of Her Mother's Love soon. Keep an eye out for it. So, yeah, thanks for doing this fic and I look forward to your future works. -Wormtail96 |
Wormtail96 1/27/10 . chapter 3Very good! I am impressed! Coraline 2 got what she deserved, AND more. But amazing...with her butt being THAT big, you'd think it would have to be days before it started hurting! LOL! Very good ending with Coraline 2 in the prison behind the mirror. I will go on to review the next chapter right away. |
The Laugher1234 1/27/10 . chapter 4Great. Very Interesting, U did really good with the behaviors of the 3 coralines and caroline. Coraline 3 speaks the truth. |
Nausicaa of the Spirits 1/27/10 . chapter 3LOL! Well done! *eagerly applauds Coraline 2's punishment* Update soon! |
The Laugher1234 1/26/10 . chapter 3Finally Coraline 2 AKA The Daughter of The Wicked Witch of West gets punished. This is great. De Javu with the mirror but still good. How come Caroline doesn't have Bf, seeing since she's the perfect one in the family. |
A Writer With Mixed Interests 1/26/10 . chapter 3Yay you updated! Update again soon! :D Maybe you should make a sequel to this, if Wormtail96 will let you. I'm sure he probably will! :D Bye! :D Well, as all the Russians say... Dasvidanya! *Queen Coraline* :D |
Rum Tum Tuggette 12/28/09 . chapter 2please update soon! |
Nausicaa of the Spirits 10/2/09 . chapter 2Ooh, Coraline 2 is in big trouble. *begins listening to the beginning of 'Mr. Heatmiser' by Big Bad Voodoo Daddy* Just a question. Why do you like corporal punishment? Your parents didn't abuse you when you were little, did they? I wasn't saying that unkindly, I was just a little concerned. So, anyway, update soon! |
A Writer With Mixed Interests 9/29/09 . chapter 2Poor Caroline! I was actually surprised that Coraline 2 didn't eat like a pig at dinnertime like usual. :D Update soon! Pretty please with sugar on top? (Puts on puppy dog face and whimpers) Oh, and, by the way, what's the Beldam gonna do to her spoiled fat daughter? Huh? |
Wormtail96 9/29/09 . chapter 2Oh! Coraline 2 is in some serious trouble. I think it is time she got something she earnt a long, LONG time ago. |
teacupz 8/30/09 . chapter 1hm, poor Coraline 1... keep update! |
SaradocCraver101 8/25/09 . chapter 1Great job on the story and please update as soon as you can. _ |