This was fantastic! Wonderful story that truly had the feel of a fairy tale. Not too long, not too short. Perfect.

Thank you for this delightful read!

Lovely job. Beautiful story!

cute story and little bit of a cheesy ending but still good. your writing style was very unique.
Mallory VH

I have only one word: Aw...

Ok, so I have a few more. That was adorable. Really. It wasn't rushed, but it wasn't too long, and it made me smile. Widely. Especially the line about what her name means, and, "I thought the high priestess was overdoing it a bit." Gods making smalltalk about their own festivals... Anywho, I smiled, I laughed, and I forgot all about the evil college paper I'm supposed to be writing, so thanks!

Denni

Awesome!

anyone who's this upfront about love is a good writer to me. Sometimes, the melodrama just isn't worth it under "romance," but you bring back the magic, my friend! :D

*laughs* I LOVE IT! You instantly like the characters. It's beautifully written. Maybe you could even get this published into a collection of fairy tales for teens/kids. :)

This is fantastic!

Your story is classic, yet with a new twist, and very well written, too. GREAT JOB!

I've never seen anything like this before, either! You wrote in the style of a fairy tale (!YAY!) so it really got me into the mystical mood even before the story began. Brilliant.

Excellent work!

"What? Really?"

I died laughing. Such a perfect line to use.

This is a short story, but still nice. I liked it. I think you should have described Aenki a bit more, but it was still a good story. No spelling or grammar errors that I noticed. People don't think that makes a difference in the story, but it really does.

so cute !!!!!!! i like it !!!! it such a good story

That was really cool!

Aw. *sniff* I love your story. Short, but sweet. :)

That was so sweet!

I loved your story! It was well written and it had meaning to it! I'm glad it had a happy ending!