Yaayyy! I loved flapjack! I wish it still came on, but regular show is cooler! Mordecaimargaret 4eva! Nice story and vocab! Keep writing!

bubbie's anomalous? shit, someone call Strelok, Scar (i think) and major degyatarev! they gonna find some artifacts!

The story was weird and random, but it was funny.

I love the use of the vocab words! Now... what does aspersion mean?

This is a great story!

I actually had a vocab test on about half these words two days ago and the whole time i was reading this story when i reconized a word i was like "I know what that word means,".

lol, anyway i love this story.

You sure do know how to use big words!

dang these are some big words. r u in the honors class or something?

Man I have to think here that Flapjack and Captain Knuckles have no idea what they're talking about. LOL! :)

this is good, I didn't read your summary at first so I was confused as to why you where using all those words which people wouldn't say in a normal conversation lol. on another note the way you tell the story though is actually like how the actual episodes are set out, keep it up.