Wow, things are tensing up! Sorry for not reviewing in ages, but I've started on too many fics at once and then gotten stuck on which one to update first.

Anyway, back to your story. If you're really desperate for ideas, and I mean really (since I'm terrible at suggesting them) I might put forward to idea of adding more tension and excitement, perhaps by making Link almost get killed? I don't know, but that sort of thing always scares me and I like it when I get scared by stories. It's very exciting for some reason...

Hope you're able to find some decent inspiration for the next chapter, and don't lose faith in this one. It's good :)

Cool!

I really like this story. You have a good writing style and the plot is well formed. A couple of minor mistakes here and there, but overall, I'd really like to read the completed story. If you're stuck for ideas, take Kattheamazing's advice and give it a few days until you feel you're ready. I know I'll be waiting to read it!

I think this story is worth continuing :). It has an original and interesting plot and you're a really good writer. If you think that your other stories are more worth continuing than this one, then you an always spend some time on those and come back to this one later. You could leave an authors note on this one telling people when you will restart this story, and then go and work on your other stories.

Either way, I think this story is really good and worth keeping. Perhaps if you took a break from it then you could think up of some more interesting and exciting ideas for it to stop yourself from getting writers block. (I get it all the time...)

Of course, the ultimate decision is yours. You don't have to follow my advice, though. Whatever you decide to do, Good luck! I'll take a look at your other stories and review them too in the near future, but for now, I have to get on with my science coursework (This stuff just never goes away). Sorry that this review was kinda long...I always write more than I'm supposed to!

I like this story! It was sad at the beginning, but I thought that it gave the story a bit of a reflective feel, which was nice. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

AWESOME!

It's good, but everyone seems a little ooc.

Aw cute please update soon i loved this story and where it might go you are a great writter!

Lilly

COOL! UPDATE SOON!

Alright! very well done! I didn't notice too many errors and well... yeah! Also you have your anonymous reviews off! please update soon!