This is a beautiful story. I have to admit, some parts I didn't understand, mostly due to the lateness of the hour, some parts of two of the chapter, the epilogue I got lost at the end. The POV switches threw me off. And in the chapter labeled 'discussions' I don't really understand what Aragorn and Legolas were doing when Legolas confronted him. Anyway, aside from those hiccups, this has been an enjoyable read. The characterizations were incredibaly well done, iq so liked how you elaborated on some of the physical differences with the Elves, it was a nice touch. Ihave to say, I loved the last couple of paragraphs of the epilogue, that metaphor comparing Elves and Men to ice/water and fire? Absolutely brilliant. Really my only problem was that I got confused with the unmarked POV switches. I hope you continue to write absolutely amazing stories (coughlordoftheringscough).

This story was so intense...in the very best (and worst) of ways.

You made me cry, laugh, and cry again.

I can't find Chapter 11 "In The Dark" on The Dusty Moth. In fact, The Dusty Moth isn't even showing up for me. I can't find it anywhere.

I can't find the chapter. This sucks. Everyone else puts their slash on this site, I fail to see why you can't!

Can someone please point me to where this website is? For Chapter 11?

can you put up a link for ch 11? i can't find it...

I like this fic, very realistic. You don't find much of that for this pairing. *snorts* rather rediculous if you ask me.
Anyways, love to be able to read chp. 11! But I can't find it.

can you send me the link at ?

I'm adding this stpry to my favorites, but I'd really love to be able to read all of it, the unedited version.

I'm a sucker for intimacy between characters that stays with the story, and from what I read in 12, you've got it down to pat. Please send me the link! Thanks,

Areata

Man, I just read those reviews for this chapter how teasing your lemon seemed to be awesome
if there were another place that this story was hosted, i wouldn't mind knowing _

Beautiful. I don't like AL, but...beautiful!

Amazingly well written and enjoyed it all
And is there any way to read the missing chapter?

help me i can't find it! i think i found the site but it looks like a search engine not a fanfiction site. i'm so confused but i really want to read it! can you post a link or something?

Hey! Great story... nearly made me cry.
Srry for my lack of understanding, but what really happened in the end? Legolas left to Mirkwood, Aragorn married Arwen... and then? I don't understand the part when Legolas gives his life to Aragorn. Please explain, I'm dying to know the ending and to understand it. you can email me at
huifei.

Many thanks

Pottertwin

Magnificent writing. It took my breath away. Good work I'm going to enjoy reading it. )

utter crap. i hate drunk aragorn. painful to read this.

Fascinated with this story-one of the best I have read at showing differences between elves and men. I would love to read the missing chapter, but can't find the website-can you help me out here?

Thanks
Oshun