aww.

that was really good...its one of my favorite books too!

That was cute, even though I see them just as friends. Or like the summary in the book says, "soulmates" but not romantically. A few spelling errors but overall it was pretty good and IC :) I love that book...there need to be more fanfictions for it!

loved your writing! just thought i should say.

It is very sweet and romantic in the same way, yet sad.

But it was overall special.

It was good, but when they kiss, you should describe it more, to make the moment seem longer. I read the book and I was really sad how it ended. I was sure they would be together. But what you wrote was kinda good!

I read Sweethearts a couple of days ago, and I loved your fanfiction. 3 This is totally how the book should have ended. I love how you made them fall in love with each other but still had Cameron leave, because it would have been really cliche if he suddenly decided to stay. This is great.

Though I did find one little mistake...

“Forget it. Forget that I even did…that,” eh said, turning away again.

Did you mean he instead of eh?

aw...i love it !3 it was soo sad that he leaves :( Is there going to be another chapter ?

Oh My Jonas thank you so much for writing this!

I too love the book Sweethearts and after reading it for the second time, I couldnt help but feel really upset that Sara Zarr ended the book without Cam and Jennifer telling eachother their true feelings about eachother.

I like your ending better than the real one in the book

write another fanfic for sweethearts I really love that book to