oh my god...thats such a depressing ending :'(

Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. So beautiful I can cry many times over!

Wow. This is amazing. Nothing else to say really.

Wow, this story is just... amazing. When i read about Sirius saying he didn't want his brothers 'sloppy seconds' a few chapters previous it actually made me say 'OOH!' This is a really good story and i love how they met again in the end in Azkaban but it's such a shame she got the dementors kiss but it was also a very good way to end it with the whole forgiveness section :)

Keep writing great stories!:)

- Samantha

Great story, I cried in the end

Awwww bless them both, their both alike, where their families don't respect them, so it's good they've finally found comfort in one another. Will it last long tho? Great chapter, looking forward to the next one :)

This is absolutely wonderful! ) Please update soon.

I'm not even sure how to review this. I'm speechless. Somehow I was listening to "The Greatest" by Cat Power for this chapter and I swear to God, I started tearing up. This was truly brilliant in my opinion. It is a great relief to see Sirius give into his love for Adelia, they are adorable. I loved their small disagreement, when all that Sirius says is her name, and they come crashing into one another.

This is my favorite chapter. Ever written on . Period.

Looking forward to more,

NotTooClean

Awwww! I feel bad that both of them get hurt by there parents, but I think it makes them closer in a way.

nice story

This is really good. I like your writing and how he's bi-polar.

Update soon :)

Aww, this is so brilliantly written.

I HATE sad endings, purly because I'm a sap, but I can't not read this, so I'm going to carry on.

:)

wow. This is excellent. Love the premise, and your writing is very good and believable and Adelia an excellent character thus far. Sirius has also been portrayed brilliantly and completely in character. The only slight critique I have for you is that Adelia is only a first year. How old is Sirius at this point? Either way, if you are intending for so kind of romantic interest, I would hope that you either skip a few years or wait for any "developments" until she's at least a fourth year... otherwise it would lend a slightly unbelievable and creepy light to this amazing fic. in which case, lily and sev and sirius would only be either one, two, tops three years older. I can't wait for you to continue. :D

loving this so far, adelia is a really believable character. can't wait to read more!

Excellent story! Can't wait for more chapters.