Nice so far!
Hope you update soon.

That stupid council!! Glad Naruto at least got to take one of them out. Keep up the good work!

Everything works in almost any kind of story. It's all up for reader, who chooses to read or not to read the story. Just write what you want, and don't think about flamers and other **.

Looks good so far. Thanks again for taking this story. I'm sure you'll do much better on it than I could have.

~Spar

I can't wait to see where you will go with this.

I'm going out on a limb and guessing it's the jutsu also changes dimensions cause otherwise Akatsuki wouldn't be there when he finished I would think? Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next ^^.

Not bad. I like how it starts. But so far it's still the same as any other time travel fict. How are you going to make it different?? Look forward to more.