Tis interesting so far, but you might want to up the rating. Generally don't expect to find anything explicit with a T.

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There you go, add a little strife/conflict and the story takes on more realistic dimensions.

I LOVE THIS! it is just so cute. Please continue writing, and you aren't bad at all.

Such a warm and nice chapter! It just made my day!^^

I just don't understand why this story isn't getting more reviews. Maybe it's too bland for fans of the series? I dunno. I have noticed that your chapters are shortening, though.

kya! I love this, it;s an interesting take then the usual you know? Hehe, you've given me an idea for a fic for this manga, which I love~ Anyway keep up the good work!

Are we going for a Disney theme? It's not a bad thing, I simply never would have thought to compare Pet Shop of Horrors to Disney movies. It is a very interesting concept.

Gah! Now that song is stick in my head. Evil person. Anyway ... Your writing is smoothing out. Perhaps the awkwardness I noticed before was simply lack of confidence or practice. Whatever it was, it's going away and your story in turning out fairly well.

Nice job ;)
It's easy and nice to read.
Count D is too much fastinated in Leon for my taste ;P
I'm really curious who D is here.
Hahaha, I recall 'Sailor Moon' and tree sailors who singing to call their queen or something like that^^
Hope you upload soon!

I like how you used the Michel Crawford and Sarah Brightman version of The Music of the Night, it's got differences from the newer one and I happen to like the older version better. Great work on your Fanfic!

I really like this story so far. Count D is so cute! Please update soon!

That looks really interesting.
I love AUs!
I hope in future you describe more of this unniverse. I'm quite curious who is Count D here.

I like when he is show that cute like here:D I also wonder about his father. It's strange Leon didn't notice resemblance.

I hope you will upload soon!

Not bad. There's something slightly awkward about the story, though. I don't know exactly what it is so sorry I'm not much help. Still, this sounds like it will be a pretty good story. I look forward to further chapters.