How beautiful and sad. You managed to put so much tenderness in this piece. Every now and then you find a story that really strikes a chord in you, and this one certainly did for me. Excellent writing. It's favorited.

That is so awfully sad, I have tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat. So beautifully executed, it’s simply perfection. Definitely one of my absolute favorite Star Trek-fics from now on. xxx

You made me cry...

OMFG! this made me cry! It's SOO sad and SOO well written its just like... wow. O.O i absolutely LOVE the way that the old memories interchange with the present! please write more like this! omg i am actually in shock and at a loss of words, this lame review totally does not do this fic justice. i wish i could say more but it was just so... perfect. it has left me speechless, which is generally hard to do.

-cries
that was so sad! YoY poor jim. i loved this.

signed,

onewhowatches :3

oh this was heartbreaking beautiful writing though

Oh, how sad!

Weeps.
I'll hope with Spock for heaven with Jim!Prime!

A beautiful sad story.

Thank you for sharing.

sorry, too lazy to log in...

any way, AMAZING and heartbreaking. Jim's dialogue is just so heart wrenching, and how you described him as blue and gold, and light, when Spock was fading...SO GOOD!

keep writing!

storyshark

Oh my, this is beautifully sad and moving. I like it a lot!