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Deritine
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
This is a good section. It does stand alone, but you might want to consider working it in to the longer story as well. I think it would add to the story and character development and reader empathy and such. Because, face it, we were all sneering at him in the show hehe. This short thing make you want to cuddle him instead.
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