|Reviews for Breathless|
| Leon 4/29/13 . chapter 1
That didn't really happen between me and Ashly
| Puckulence 8/5/12 . chapter 1
Perfect. Really, it was perfect. I laughed, I admired, I giggled, I smiled. Just perfect.
| A.O.T.I.F 4/19/12 . chapter 1
Very nicely written
| Gena346 1/5/11 . chapter 1
Lol! The beginning was perfect. The whole ugly and beautiful party was wonderful. I love the end too!
| jesshika 11/29/09 . chapter 1
your leon has to be the best leon out there. i was giggling like mad with him. he IS silly ]
ashley was very well written too. its nice to see that she can actually do something and doesnt just sit there and do nothing.
| EroSempai 11/3/09 . chapter 1
Very good story! The is one of the only AshleyxLeon fics I can say makes him seem like he is in the game. I liked the descriptions and the sexual tension placed in the story, maybe one of my stories should have it now lol. Thank you for a great story of an unlikely pairing.
| shadowXvampire 10/15/09 . chapter 1
Very cool story!
| efs 10/13/09 . chapter 1
you are a really good authour, i masturbated to this xD
| Devil Rebel 8/20/09 . chapter 1
| LillyMunster 8/20/09 . chapter 1
I love your story ! Please, make it a two-shot as mentioned or write another one !
| Natureboy3 8/18/09 . chapter 1
*Claps* Bravo! Encore! Wonderful job!
Ashley's going to be pregnant! Please make this a two-shot!
| Gina 8/18/09 . chapter 1
I loved it! Are you going to write more? I think you should! :D
Yeah and the other comment is right, even if she was on the pill, it stopped working a long time ago.
Anyways, this was very nice. :D
| KawaiiKittyChan 8/18/09 . chapter 1
Very well written, I personally love the Leon/Ashley pairing, for a while I thought I was the only person that did not hate her. The way everything fell into place was just perfect. Your descriptions on the situations and locations were as such. The only thing I have to say bothered me a bit is the references to the pill and college for one. They had been out there for weeks so even if she was sing the pill she would have 1: ran out long ago 2: Probably not even brought them when she was taken away. 3: Not have remembered to take them in such a dangerous situation. Besides that during the time I was in college I felt no attraction to any of the boys there. Being in college does not guarantee the loss of virginity, no matter how pretty or cute you are.
Well, That was a useless rant of mine but I felt I had to say it.
So yes, I admit... I do like other things than Hellsing.. Congratulations you made it to place the only Non-Hellsing/related story on my favorites list. I will be checking you out more often.
| Won Tawn 8/17/09 . chapter 1
aww cute :] well I certainly hope she wasn't a virgin ahaha. not that any sane, straight girl should object to loosing that to Leon haha.