this one could do with some beta-ing - it was pretty full of gramatical errors and the like - but despite that, i still loved it. most of the time if there are a lot of mistakes in something, i really dont like it, good plot idea or not. but this one i really enjoyed even though it had errors.

i loved this episode - probably for that scene! i really love the merlin arthur friendship, and that scene had so much of it. Oh! It was great. :) and this was a great little acompaniment (sp?) to it. it was nice to get a little of what arthur was thinking at the time.

perhaps just read over it again to fish out some of the typos. :)

Bundi

Great job! I realy liked the last line.

Oh Arthur!

I can tell he's more nice then he lets on...you know apart from being a prat and all! :D

absolutely Perfect

And when he wakes his thoughts would be "What the f*ck? This ain't Heaven." lol!

Great one-shot.

His last thought before darkness overtook him was how sorry he was for Merlin to witness this.
Aw...that was really good... :D
PS: Throughout the story I was kind of wanting jumping POVs...maybe a thought if you decide to try something like this again? :)
MBM

Nice.

Loved it! :) You really interpreted this scene well, it's one of my favourite ones in the series. Thank you for the lovely read,
Kar, xx

please do Merlin's pov, this was so good! i loved i, you captured the scene and the emotions and the characters so well