|Reviews for The City is at War|
| Nekotsubasa 3/25/10 . chapter 22
Thanks for providing us with such an awesome story, and I'm sure we'll all be delighted to read the new one! -w-
| chibi heishi 3/25/10 . chapter 22
Thank you for the notice, and will do.
| SlippingSanity 3/18/10 . chapter 21
Oh man, it's the end, lol! I came back recently and instantly zeroed in on this fanfic, lol! All that I can say is that this is quite obviously one fic I will be reading constantly over and over. This is also 'the only gay guy story I will ever read' as said by my friend who finished the story before me, lol! Anyway, epic story! Thanks for totally making my return home even sweeter, lol!
| singingstars 3/3/10 . chapter 21
Aw, a perfect ending! :D
You GOTTA make a sequel!
If there isn't I think I will DIE
| BreakBeauty 3/3/10 . chapter 21
Oh mah gawd! It's so saddening to think that this is the last chapter, but it was so amazing! I'm sorry it took me this long to get to read it. You have such an amazing talent for writing, it's ridiculous! This is definitely a job well done, my friend. Bravo!
| singingstars 3/2/10 . chapter 20
OHMYGAWSH. IM SO SORRY I HAVENT REVIEWED IN FOREVER T_T
SO MANY THINGS CAME UP!
The ending of this chapter made me squeal ;3
I JUST SAW THE BEGINNING OF THE NEXT CHAPTER.
LAST CHAPTER? T_T RNAKNRWKSABDL:SAD
| Prihnex 2/28/10 . chapter 21
TEWG: LOVE THIS STORY. THERE BETTER BE A SEQUEL! 3 GET THINKING!
801: Makes me wonder how Cloud and Sora would've reacted if they knew about Leon. Argh! This is like a cliffhanger!
TEWG & 801
| chibi heishi 2/12/10 . chapter 21
*falls over laughing* "yes, Leon, it does. Otherwise I wouldn’t be able to live with myself.” That's too funny. Poor boys. Also, I'm very glad that all three of the Seed's made it out ok. I was terribly worried that Squall would lose one of his friends (I had every confidence that Squall himself would make it out - you wouldn't do that to us). But this was a satisfying ending to a good story.
I will now add my voice to those begging for a sequel - I badly want to see Cloud and Squall's 'complicated' relationship, and Axel and Roxas all made-up, and (of course, being slightly obsessed with the guy) Riku's interaction with the Leonhardt family. All two of them.
| natcat5 2/11/10 . chapter 21
This story was great! I really liked it. I especially liked how subtle the AkuRoku and RiSo was. Especially the RiSo. I'd almost like you to do a sidestory to see what happened between them when Leon was away! Actually, besides that, I'd like you to do a sequel. Honestly, this was super enjoyable and I'd love to know what happened to the characters after.
| ooXloveXoo582 2/10/10 . chapter 21
aw! this ending was amazingg!
I had this huge silly smile spilt all over my face when i read thiss!
you need to add one moree chapter! I wanna see how Riku and Sora work outt! Oh my God this was such an amazing story! i cant contain my joy any longerr! ah! I wanna break down and crry! I love corba Starship by the wayy..
and you must keep in touch with me because my story is almost ready for fanfiction! and it would mean the world to me if you read it.
I am going to miss this story, it was so good and thrilling and romantic and so many other words could describe this story i just seem to be at a loss of them at the moment, and sorry for taking so long again, my computer was getting the shit beat out of it by a nasty virus that finally went away. I am going to miss you and your stories for the time being!
Tons of love!
| SUFFERINGLOSTSOUL 2/7/10 . chapter 21
Hey there! Sorry I'm late!
Wow, it's over, huh?
It was so great. I really liked this story.
Gave me a bit of a scare there, when Leon got injured. It would've been beyond horrible if he were not able to get home after all he's been through.
But, he made it back to the ones that care about him after all.
I really like how you write. You've got talent.
Thanks for sharing this story with us.
| Shukakku the adorable raccoon 2/7/10 . chapter 21
aw its over? WHY? u need to make a sequel yep definitely a sequel *nods*
| xacilia 2/7/10 . chapter 21
OH GOD. It's over. I should've started studying for my upcoming Accounting exam but crap if I didn't read this first. And I'm wholly satisfied! You wrote an epic end to an epic story. I liked the bromance going on between Seifer, Leon, and Zell; it was very endearing to watch in a rough and manly way, you know :) Oh, I think you meant Seifer here:
Zell and Dincht seemed just as eager to leave as he did and after being formally dismissed from duty, all three loaded up their SeeD-issue duffle bags into a jeep, climbed in, and were driven all the way to the airport.
Your ending had me grinning it was almost painful to my cheeks. I loved the reunion you wrote. I can see that Cloud's finally resolved his internal conflict concerning Leon and his concept of justice (LOL). I'm just really satisfied and happy with this story as a whole. I'm really glad I was able to read this from start to end. I really hope you start another story soon. I always end up loving your stories and pairings, and I doubt I won't adore your future works as well Amazing job! See you soon :)
| JigokuYume 2/7/10 . chapter 21
That was perfect. Beautifully written. And the fighting scenes really had the sense of tension and anxiety that filter the air in war :D. Perfect. 3 Shall be waiting for more! Michi
| ramen-is-my-goddess 2/7/10 . chapter 21
Excellent ending. I'm glad I finally got a chance to read this last chapter. Long and satisfying. Gripping too, it's like...almost 2:40 in the morning and I'm wide awake from that xD So much ACTION! and PASSION! and INTENSITY! Whoo!
But in all honesty, it's sad to see it go, just like any other story, but I really loved the ending and I'm glad things worked out, though Leon getting pegged in the gut I didn't see coming...and yet I did. I figured, 'somethin's gotta go wrong right before the happy ending...that's how it works!'
Anyways, great job as always and whether you continue off of this story or start a new one, you can bet I'll find it and love it xD because that's what I do.