These are amazing so far. They are short but they are done well. I have no idea why I'm so drawn to angst, but I am. You do a good job keeping the emotion in check (not overly angsty) but enough to make me sigh in sadness. haha. I haven't read the comics (I'm on the movie bandwagon, sadly) but I'm guessing it has to be somewhat sad because every comic based Iron Man fic has a nice touch of angst.

Anyway, can't wait to read the others.

ok, so far, this is awful. each ficlet is way too short, they don't by themselves or even together form a story. more like random thoughts put together. and yes, i know this is in the comics section and comics tend to be more angst & grittier than the movie, but there is no room at IM fanfic for angst stories. if you want to write those, go write for Batman.