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RosaE
2010-01-07 . chapter 29
Oh, I'm so glad Draco and Harry were able to see each other, it will be good for them. Poor Draco! I'm so sorry for him. I guess Lucius is feeling really bad about all this and Narcissa doesn't look like she is going to forgive him soon. Great chapter! Thanks so much for the update. Looking forward to the next.
excessivelyperky
2010-01-07 . chapter 9
What a lovely wedding! And Harry is brilliant, too--wanting to see the people around him happy, but still wanting Sirius to be his dad.
LoireLoa
2010-01-04 . chapter 29
Yay! All is well again. And hopefully Lucius will finally let the grudge go.
goodythreeshoes
2010-01-04 . chapter 29
The ending was utterly adorable. And I love Oliver!
pammiez x3
2010-01-04 . chapter 29
lol i loved oliver's little rant :] poor harry was mortified!
it was nice that hermione's parents got to see her. most importantly, i think harry and draco needed to see each other; it will help them both heal :]
tinkita
2010-01-04 . chapter 29
Fantastic story! I love it! Please update soon!
witchsbroom
2010-01-04 . chapter 29
OMG what a chapter. Looks like Narcissus has put away her pride for her son (who would have thought she would) Love Sirius idea of putting Molly in the other seat (oh yeah those snobs won't like that, but it sure would balance out that bunch of idiots) and having her sit next to Lucius now that I'd like to see. Sure hope this little meeting will help Draco in his recovery and that he and Harry can go back to being friends
show.me.the.stars
2010-01-03 . chapter 29
Aww, I'm so glad that Harry and Draco are making up again--poor Draco, he must've felt so terrible!! And for Narcissa to forgo her pride like that...yup, she definitely loves her son, can't deny that.

I feel really bad for poor Remus, too. He's gonna have to tell Harry about the full moon soon, right? Harry wont play ignorant forever, and the longer Remus keeps it from Harry the less accepting of the truth he's gonna be. Harry's gonna feel betrayed Remus didn't trust Harry enough to tell him the truth... -sigh-

It could certainly end messily.

And AWW for the scene at the beginning with the Grangers and Harry--that was so cute!!
My inner fangirl was squealing at the Harry and Hermione moment, HHr has always been my most favourite ship, LOL.

Until next time!!
.clumsy.carrie.
2010-01-03 . chapter 29
this was extremely cute...and i thought Mrs. Malfoy's love of her son surpassing her hatred of sirius and his disregard for the pureblood legacy of their family was very realistic. good job!

xoxox
carrie
librarywitch
2010-01-03 . chapter 29
Awesome as always. You do such a wonderful job with just the right amount of suspense. You have protrayed Remus and Sirius' relationship so well. Thanks for sharing.
jogger
2010-01-03 . chapter 29
Beautiful again!! The Oliver scene was so perfectly Oliver...take one for the team, LOL Poor Harry. I don't know how you do it, but I always feel so present in your story, like I was in the infirmary, and later in the kitchen at GP.

The Hermione stuff was darling, so glad they all got to spend some time together, it just breaks my heart for Hermione's parents, always being unable to reach their daughter, glad Sirius could help with that.

Sirius and Remus have just got to figure this out. Sirius seems certainly suspicious enough...I can't wait to see what they discuss with Dumbledore.

It was extremely gracious of Sirius and Remus to accept the "olive branch" that Narcissa offered, as much so as it was difficult for Narcissa to offer it. ALL of them putting the needs of their children before their own. It must have been difficult for Remus and Sirius to trust after what happened to their son, whether it was Draco's fault or not, but they knew it was important for Harry, and they truly never blamed Draco, always saying it wasn't his fault...I suppose it would be ridiculous to expect an apology from Lucius. They have no proof anyway...

There were so many quiet moments between characters that "said" so much, it really was splendid!!

Thanks for a wonderful update.
Ponytail Goddess
2010-01-03 . chapter 29
Great chapter! You know, reading this fic actually makes me feel like J.K.'s version is a bit off because really, had those things happened to Harry, he should have been more messed up after it was all said and done than he turned out to be in canon. This approach seems more realistic, with the dreams starting earlier than Cedric's death.

It was nice to see Remus and Harry together by themselves for a change. Oh, and I thought the scene between Remus and Sirius was cute. I admit, you've got them growing on me a bit.

Nice work--I look forward to more! Will we get to hear a conversation between Narcissa, Sirius, and Remus next? I'd be interested in reading what may or may not go down between them in the office...

-P.G.
wrappedinharry
2010-01-03 . chapter 29
Wonderful chapter. Perhaps it is just me, but there still seems to be a little tenseness between Harry and Remus. I keep waiting for some reference to how Remus went to the school to punish Harry for 'lying' about the map and cloak. It just seems to me as if Harry isn't as easy with Remus as he once was.

It is good to see Harry and Draco get back to normal so easily when they are face to face. Kudos to Narcissa for biting the bullet to try and make her son's world right again.

It was lovely of Sirius to have the Grangers to stay so that they could be with Hermione.

Lesley~
DazzlingD
2010-01-03 . chapter 29
I love this story. I also like the small glimpses of Severus.
emitate
2010-01-03 . chapter 29
so cute!
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