If you hate the ending, think it over. I don't hate it, but...I see what you mean. So think it over.

Hey, why'd you hate the ending? Not everything has to be spelt out and the last line was fine. I thought you rushed 14 and 15, thus missing out on some of the anticipation that fires the earlier sections but still, I prefer this understated, open ending to a cliched one... for what that's worth.

Awh, I love them ! :)

Aw, that was cute. I'm glad you're getting back into Dasey. :D

Aww, it's cute! I'm not sure about the ending ... maybe if you changed "boy and girl" to "man and woman," it would give it more of the Dasey inference. However, I think you did a wonderful job with it, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Ya its really good but 15. kinda gets to me. I like all but the last sentence. Hate that sentence. NOT becasue you wrote it! Just makes it seem Dasey-less, ya know? I don't know how to fix it though.
Very cute one-shot!!
~Crystal

The ending would of been better if there was a kiss...but it still was a good storie.

that was cute! the ending would be better if they had a kiss!

I liked the ending, it worked just fine. I like how you each step is basically a phase.

I think maybe you don't like your ending because you left it open to a lot. You said they live like a boy and a girl. But that could mean anything. Which is also very Casey and Derek. Because they could mean anything. Nice one-shot.

~Chica~

I know what u mean about the ending - I really like most of it then the ending is awkward and just kind of ends - I think it needs a little more like - but now when they pass each other in the hallway (their hallway) they look at each other..and kind of go from there.. thoughts?

Well done, I like the slowl builting up of feelings and the end was good becoue you can look at it two ways, as just a boy and a girl, or as men and wife. It all how you look at it and that the best thing about it.

Well...I liked the ending, in fact I liked the whole story. I appreciate the way you slowly built up Derek and Casey's friendship and then left them at a place where they seemed close to becoming something more. Nicely done.