|Reviews for Peaches|
| xxxIloveKISSHUxxx 4/3/12 . chapter 1
awwww this was sooooooooooooo beautiful kyaaaa
I like the peach now
and the strawberrys jajaja
Moo I want to eat a Quiche
| No1DrenLover 4/13/10 . chapter 1
Aw! How cute! So funny and playful as well! x
Dren/Kisshu x Zoey/Ichigo 4Ever!
I LOVE DREN/KISSHU!
| simoneevee8 3/27/10 . chapter 1
O i so luved this its so cute
| ArtemisMoonHunter 1/20/10 . chapter 1
Aw, that one was cute. I liked reading it! It was super fun... I'm trying to find some good one-shots to read,and this was fun! :)
| Brown-eyed Wolf 10/3/09 . chapter 1
["I hate that guy,” Kish muttered.]
I agree with Kisshu! :P
Again, I always find myself loving your fics!
:D They just have that certain something that makes them amazing. As others have said, Kish's 'jerky-ness' is perfect and I congragulate you for that! :D
All and all, loved it!
| True Colours 9/3/09 . chapter 1
So Kish swiped it off her, threw it up in the air and caught it (making contact with flesh) and then started to eat it?
Good peaches don't crunch.
Okay, I'm feeling a little panicky here, as I always do when a fic is really, REALLY good and I don't know where to begin with my review. So I'm just going to go for bullet points here.
. Much as I love Kish x Ichigo, I can never shake the feeling that they're just impossible because Kish is such a jerk. So this was perfectly in keeping with the cannon due to its onesidedness, without being tragic. The despair hits later.
. Kish was absolutely, utterly, perfectly in character. Speaking of despair hitting later, he just knows perfectly well that Ichigo will never love him but keeps cheerfully trying anyway. And you captured that beautifully.
. His contempt at the peach. 'A silly fruit? A stupid peach? That's all it takes to make you happy?' And he's dangling it over her head, you're not trying to gloss over his jerkiness (ties in with point one) and you're conveying his mindset that nothing is too good for his Koneko-chan, and he thinks that Masaya isn't good enough for her. 'What has that fool got that I haven't got?' All of this, summed up in one little reaction to a peach.
. 'What's so special about him anyway? Apart from that he gave you a peach?' oh, MIAOW! Nice little bit of humour there.
. I'm not sure she would start rambling to Kish about how perfect Masaya is, though.
. And then the way he starts verbally poking her. 'I'll leave if you give me a kiss.' 'What if I give you a peach?' 'I could kiss you anyway.' It's his indefatigable streak again.
. And when he runs his hand through his hair. We don't often see Kish exasperated or at a loss, though we see him infuriated a lot, so there were subtle implications and a nice change of mood in that gesture. Temporarily confounded.
. Why did he suddenly start wanting the peach?
. Yet again, jerky Kish (like you said on your profile) when he starts ordering her to give him the peach.
. I adore all the dialogue. The 'yeah?' 'yeah.' ness, showing how they're sort of on the same wavelength, the brief pauses while Kish runs a hand through his hair and ponders (that's what I was trying to say before) then tries a new tack, the nmore silence.
. 'I prefer strawberries to peaches.'
. 'Don't you want to know what I taste like?'
Good lines both.
That might be my longest review ever. There was one point, just after ichigo stood up to leave, when the action became a little hard to follow, so make sure you read it through from a stranger's point of view. But overall, this has to be one of the most perfect oneshots I have ever read. Not a line wasted. In fact, I think I may favourite it!
| aurla0 8/29/09 . chapter 1
oh, it is cute. but Kish was sorta mean to do that to Ichigo. I dont really like it... But it is very good.
| Saba's Reflection 8/19/09 . chapter 1
Yet again, you have perfected another successful story with great achievement. You are a fave when it comes to writing beautiful Kichigo, as you never fail to keep them in character...
Peaches. You've made me hungry for the fruit and I've never even had one... xD
| Suuz112 8/19/09 . chapter 1
That was so freaking cute! xD
| MewSara100 8/18/09 . chapter 1
AWE! So cute! I like how Kish finally got the peach! God Bless!
| mew mew 124 8/18/09 . chapter 1
I'm definatly adding this to my favs list,
Just a question, r u probably going 2 make another story 2 follow up on this 1?
| LittleSparrowFlewAway 8/18/09 . chapter 1
Hurray another fic! -jumps up and down happily-
This was so cute! I wuved it! Oh look heres my favorite part: (“So Masaya gave it to you?”
“Yes,” Ichigo replied happily.
He kicked a pebble across the grass. “What's so special about him anyway? Other than that he gave you a peach.”
“Everything,” Ichigo sighed and stars were visible in her eyes as she exclaimed, “his gorgeous dreamy eyes... The way his hair falls over his forehead. How he such a gentlemen, and so perfect, and when-”
Kish looked like he was about to gag. “I'll leave if you give me a kiss,” he said suddenly.
“In your dreams,” Ichigo snorted.
“I could give you a peach,” Kish suggested.
“Don't you dare.”
“Would you kiss me then?”
Kish sighed again, running a hand through his hair.
“No,” Ichigo told him finally.
“What if I kiss you anyway?” Kish said slyly, wiggling his eyebrows.
Ichigo turned to face him. “Don't.”)
Hurray for cuteness! Hurray for awesomeness! Hurray for epic fics! Nice work Bunny-chan! (Is it okay if I call you that?) Anyway, this one was really sweet, light hearted, and rather refreshing!
| Rizu Neko-Chan 8/18/09 . chapter 1
Ah, arguing over people's "flavors". I've seen it used before, but I really like how you centered the story around the peach instead of focusing the entire flow of the story on who tastes like what (lol, that sounded weird).
One of my favorite aspects of this story is how in-character Kish is. I think you really have a feel for how he's supposed to act. I mean, he's not all gentlemanly around Ichigo like a lot of people make him out to be. He's kind of acting like a little bit of a jerk, trying to steal Ichigo's peach and criticizing her happiness over it. Not only is Kish in character, so is Ichigo, who seemed annoyed and mad for almost all of the story.
Personally, when I think of biting into a peach, I don't think "crunch". I think of more of a "sloosh". But maybe that's just me.