I JUST found this fic!It's so KAWAII_ PLEASE,PLEASE make it an Kazuki!Or maybe have a love square between Ryou,Kazu,Rika,and Jen and then make it an Kazuki OKAY!cuz that pairing is very rare but so kawaii_even though I don't really mind Jenruki or Ryuki's...and a Digimon fic called Darken Pathways has a character called Sen and has lots of pairing with Ruki and has that pairing of Sen/Ruki but that's in another fic but I really don't mind that coupling either and plus I think their kawaii too!Ciao_

Oh, I really really love it! Especially the triangles so, please continue soon!

Woah cool.
Suzie and Kai make a cute couple.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

this is really good!

so, a perfect is an ultimate, and an ultimate is a mega?

or is a perfect a champion and an ultimate is an ultimate?

I'm not used to the originals...

CONTINUE!

I'd like to see Henrika all the way! Is one of the tamers the golden tethrahedron or one of the new characters. Keep writing!

Good Story. I'm for Jenruki all the way!

This is the only thing I can think of for the Kai's. Don't have them together a lot. And when you do don't have them talk right after one another. Keep writing!

I can only say one word about this stort...AWESOME! I love your story so far! Can't wait till chapter X!

Your fic is coming out really good. i myself can't really see Ruki having a crush on Hirokazu but it's your story, see I'm a jenruki fan. I don't have anything against hirokazuXruki it's just that it'd probaly wouldn't happen. even if it did it wouldn't last too long. Oh and in one of your last chapters you had the tamers at night with sleeping bags. I thought you said that they didn't have anything except their D-Arks with them when they went to the digital world so how the hell did they get sleeping bags? I don't really think you need anymore characters cuz then there'd be too many people but you should basically do as many as you think you can handle. Oh and you haven't mentioned a word about kenta at least in the last to chapters or possibliy three. Really sorry bout having to bring these things right in your face cuz i feel like i'm sorta critizing (did i even spell that right?) you.

ThE dIgImOn QuEeN

Ohayoo! Tis me! Bakura's Angel under my real name! Whee, m'lovin this! I think you should call Takato's cousin Kai M, y'know Matsuki, but initialized, and the other Kai can be Kai C (for Clone). I think Kai M and Shiouchon should both go to the digital world, and meet up with Lopmon, and give Kai M a digimon partner, cuz he deserves one! Like PATAMON! YEAH! And his D-Power can be Gold and Silver! Wheeeeeee! Or maybe Alice should come, and meet up with Dobermon again! Sugoi! Well, I'll leave the decision making to you!

Ja ne!

WAHOO! Gotta lurve this story! Keep writing!

Wow, interesting plot here. Can't wait to see how this turns out. Oh yeah, as for your questions about the Japanese names for the attacks, here goes
Metalgarurumon- Metal Wolf Claw I believe was originally Kokyutoss Breath and Freeze Bomber. I think that Kokyutoss Breath is the one you used in your fic while Freeze Bomber is the one with all the missiles being launched. Rapidmon's Tribeam was originally Golden Triangle while Growlmon's Atomic Blaster(I think but I'm not sure) is the same. I hope that I could be of some help, don't ask me what Kokyutoss means, I have no idea.

OMG! i hav been waiting forever to find dis story!(read it b4 and lost track of it) its sooooo kawaii! hurry and finish it and dun keep me waiting _- it took like months for me to find the story again...plz dun take dat long again... :p

YAY! WAIIIII! I lurve this! And, yes, I am named after Bakura from Yu-Gi-Oh! He is my absolute fave character... form that show! _ Keep writing! And Bakura is sweet as the change of heart card!

Ryo is soo kewl!

Yay for the digimon! _