cool story! i guess some time limits are just too short. lol

Lov it

WOW, is all I can say. It's well-written and I love the interaction between Tommy and Kim. You should write a part two to this story.

...is there a fic written for the 'next night'?

i know that i have probably already reviewed this but Shawn, another good jos **has to fan self**

you should really consider writing maybe a sequel to this maybe with thier date the following night!

again shawn, another wonderful story! had to douse my self with cold water **laughs**

i will be totally,completely and absolutely gutted if you don't write a sequel to this! This is you back to your best- in my opinion. This angsty style is definitely the style i enjoy reading most from you. The wait for a sequel now begins...

So I have to say that I really enjoyed this piece. You did a really great job of capturing two people that are on the verge of truly becoming adults all the while still being teenagers in some part of their hearts. I also like the sexy side you gaze to Tommy and Kim that we didn't get to see in the show. It's something that is definately plausible and believable. Their conversation was also enjoyable to read, because it was mature and well handled.

Angst, sexy, and a good ending. I truly enjoyed reading this and it made me smile. :D

Peronally, I enjoyed the story. This is a point where you can just see them becoming the adults you always manage to write them as while still retaining a bit of the teenagers we loved so much.

It was a hot piece, meant to be angsty, sexy and flirty, showing that they are growing up and not the innocent little angels we saw on the show.

Great job and wonderful piece

Damn! Wow. Very sweet and very hot! Can't wait for more.

OOC sums this up pretty well. Kim's depiction was ..weird(could she have changed so much just one year from the PR movie?). What is most irritating is that you wrote Tommy here as some emotional pansy, as if he's always waiting for Kim to throw him a bone...nevermind that she broke his hear callously

5 minutes? Well that quite the most interesting thing I've read that actually happened in the supposedly 5 minutes. LOL. Bad Tommy... oh well, something like should at least be worth all the world saving he's been doing for all those years.

Here I thought you'd actually go for phone sex. :P Shawn, you never cease to surprise me and keep me in suspense.

A VERY inventive use of five minutes. Any chance of sequel?

Fluved it. The progression of the convo and the end result flowed perfectly. So well written.

And you should allow anonymous reviews. They help feed the beast!

really good, are you going to write more? if so, can't wait to read more

That was definetly new. something I have never read about from you. keep up the great work. Can't wait to see what you come up with next