nice! will you continue?

So I need to just pipe up and go on twitter more often and ask for recs! BB, this was excellent!

I love lines like this, that are what they are, and mean what they mean, but also speak to who the person is. Or was.

Thank you, THANK YOU, for giving Bella hips. So much fic is based on physical ideals and emotional difficulty. Which is fine, but it's really refreshing to see a Bella that's a 'real' woman. These lines were perfect: She has a little roundness to her face and the soft curves of her body speak of children and domesticity. Not that that bothers me one bit. I like women that look like women, and this "Bella" looks like a woman.

I honestly would not have thought that the removal of spanx and the like could be that sensual, but it really was.

It's a curse, a promise, and a blessing. - Loved this so much.

I was really moved by the fact that she's self deprecating and he doesn't let her get away with it.

Him, running back to her...really moving. Life is sometimes made up of little moments, things that change you without your knowledge or consent. I love that this one night, starting just like any other night, changed who he is.

Are you the reason she's crying?- I love her daughter already, and that sentence alone illustrated that while they are good now, that the getting there had it's hard moments.

And I adored how she sent him pictures, even though she's hesitant. Like she still doesn't always get how he sees her...which is more true than her immediatly being miraculously happy with her perceived flaws. She's still a woman. A beautiful man doesn't erase self doubt, and I thought that was portrayed well without being overdone. But when he strips her down, when he shows her the effects, she gets it.

This was really exactly what I needed tonight :) Great job and thank you!

WHy has it taken me so long to find you?

Excellent fic. I like to whole Mrs. Robinson play.

good

aww really good two part story I really enjoed it!

Oh dear God (so hot), on behalf of zaftig women everywhere... Thank You! It's nice to read about a bigger girl being admired for her form, her body being desired, and not made fun of... Miles Dalrymple would be so proud! : )

I hadn't seen this before. Thank you for adding it to the original one shot. I loved the first and I loved this too. I really enjoy Edward trying to deal with children especially preteens and teens.

Wonderful peek into the future.

Erica

Marie0912 recd this. LOVED IT!

excellent story. i wish there was going to be more.

Awe... their so cute, in a naughty sort of way :-) Can't wait for more!

So sweet - great chapter and thanks for sharing her bday gift with us!

aww this is soo sweet xP i'm in love with this bella and edward! i also love sabrina xP who's her father?

(putting on story alert just in case *wink*)

love this!

Daddyward! Okay you found my kryptonite... not even joking. ;) Heheh, this was SO good, J. Loved it! Thank you for writing. :)

Oh god I loved this. Why it took me so long to read, I have no idea. Loveloveloved it. A lot. And there's more? *squeals*

caren