|Reviews for Deimos Swing|
| raeshilin 2/25/13 . chapter 11
Finally, I was able to retrieve my FF password ;D and now for my review...
Honestly, I'm quite disappointed. Don't get me wrong, I totally love your work. I mean I was expecting more of Spike and Faye being together and the fact that Julia's there :roll eyes: But I guess there will be a lot of SxF scenes on the next chapter (of course) lol Will it be the final chapter? ugh please update soon.
| Shisenki 2/16/13 . chapter 11
omg! o_O like omigingerbreadman!XD
Spike you idiot, wake up! She's already THERE!XDD
Faye, happy-happy-happy-happy birthday! Hahaha specifically your 80 but technically your celebrating your 26th birthday!Hahaha
Okay, your making me feel anxious for the next chapter/ the part 2... omg, I can't wait is the whole commotion was plot by Spike or a evil mastermind... Gonna wait for it! Update soon!
| liz-sakura 2/15/13 . chapter 11
Hello and thank you very much for his message and the notice of the new chapter, I like me very much.
For that this waiting spike to find Faye? haaaa! if not why he goes to visit deimos? and poor Faye, hopefully achieve happiness. What will be happening? Why a gun? uuuyy are many questions And I stay in suspense jajjaja, but left me excited and waiting for the next chapter. please update soon :)
| Harumigirl 2/15/13 . chapter 11
You totally own this chapter i liked th quote: "The wonderful person destined for her wasn't born yet during the time she lived, so she waited, and waited. She waited a long time to find the one for her" ITS BEAUTIFUL and so true, Its part of we the fans of S/F want to believe, it was destiny who play it part in encounter of this two, Julia was the first love of Spike, but Faye is the one final woman for him. hehehehehe or so I felt it that way, do you agree?
I want to the next chap. so close to the final. :D
| Shisenki 12/25/12 . chapter 10
I hope you would update soon! I really love the story!
| LittleToxic 12/5/12 . chapter 1
I stumbled across your fanfic by accident and I must say I am glad I did. I am looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
| liz-sakura 12/3/12 . chapter 10
I'm new and I just read your story, I apologize in advance if you do not understand my comment, my original language is Spanish and I translated it as best I could lol, but I wanted to mention it is a lovely story, and the description of feelings is very good, I enjoyed the chapter 7, on the other fic had not seen a representation of pain faye and this one could identify with the picture, I really liked. The fact that it has a new home, nose, since I believe that your home will always bebop, although at times the narrative may not engage a little to the series, is one of my stories Please be updating soon.
Ps: You and I like extensions of responsibility, and the author's comments, in his recent comments there is no happy ending completely, or that's what I understood, well that depends on the author jajja, but really, I hope no, I would like a happy ending, but like I said it depends on you.
| Harumigirl 11/5/12 . chapter 10
Ohh my..! I have to be sincere, this "moving on" of Faye is good for her and what she deserves, i mean i like her more when she is strong enough to live her own way, she is one of the strongest women of anime id ever seen, and i love her that way. And of course, Spike deserves that Faye move on that is the only way that he realize how wonderfull and the great loving woman that she is!
even with all that the fangirl inside me wants a really loveydoveyromantic final, for this too, bec after words they deserves to be together and belongs each other for real, there is not other way...!
heheheheh i am so excited! see you in next chapter!
| raeshilin 11/5/12 . chapter 10
that's wow! i've been waiting for this chapter..hmm i really thought that Apollo will be Spike's rival.. i mean t'was a relief to know that Apollo has a wife hoho i love the latter part of the chapter especially the confession thingy.. i was wondering what Spike felt when Apollo tells the story of the man that Faye loves... well what can i say... i'll be waiting for your update _ mabuhay ka ate _
| The Burdened Muse 11/4/12 . chapter 4
Oh the irony of it all. I really like this chapter because how it mirrors episode 3 of Cowboy Bebop. Faye, once again on the Bebop, tied to a chair. At least this time she was put in her old room and not in a toilet stall. This chapter put a nostalgic smile on my face. You even had Faye scream the same sentence as the first time she was in that situation "GET ME OUT OF HERE!" :D
All that was missing was some howling and talk of Gypsy folk and it would have been as if they were right at the beginning again...
I move on to chapter 5.
| The Burdened Muse 11/4/12 . chapter 3
Quite the contrary to your A.N. at the end of the chapter, I felt Spike was very much in character, I didnt really feel any OOC-ness added to the dialogue. But hey, that's just me.
I did feel this chapter was lighter and less intense than the previous two chapters, but maybe that's because Ed had a scene in this chapter. Regardless, I still very much enjoyed the read, and I proceed to chapter 4.
| The Burdened Muse 11/4/12 . chapter 2
Faye Valentine has always been such a contradictory character; she wished to know about her past so badly, and yet she was also running away from it, drowning it down in bounty hunting and gambling. And now, she runs away from her past once more. I find it strange, but fitting that she would run away from Spike, after all this isn't Romeo and Juliet, she wouldnt just jump into his arms. And even if she did, would Spike accept her?
Food for thought until I read on.
The more I re-read this story, the more I feel like kicking myself right in the head, as impossible as that maybe, for not continuing with it.
Chapter 3 awaits.
May your mind be filled with ideas, and you inbox filled with reviews.
- The Burdened Muse.
P.S. Did you ever listen to the song Pearls by Yoko Kanno and Ilaria Graziano? It was produced for Cowboy Bebop, but I don't believe it was ever used in the anime or movie, because I don't remember hearing the song. Regardless, it's a very relaxing Jazz piece, with Ilaria singing in Italian. Thought you might enjoy it.
| The Burdened Muse 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Truly, I have to apologize for abandoning your story in such a manner, Miss Releina, after leaving you a glowing review on chapter 5 of this master piece. Thus I have decided to leave you a review on every chapter available, detailing my thoughts and critique regarding this story.
First of all, I would like to comment that your choice for a title is very clever and apt for a Cowboy Bebop story, and I commend your memory to remember that fact from your Earth Science teacher :D
Next, I am amazed at how well you can keep the characters true to their Anime counterparts. The dialogue flows so well, like a calm river, that it feels so true, as if written by Keiko Nobumoto herself!
It makes me hopeful that in the future, my work can reach such a incredible caliber. Not to mention the quantity of your work, 31 stories! Wow. I only have but a humble two. :D
Well, I believe it is time for me to move on to chapter 2.
May your mind be filled with ideas, and your inbox filled with reviews.
- The Burdened Muse.
| Endlos Nacht 10/11/12 . chapter 9
I've been waiting for an update and you didn't disappoint.
| Jez0209 9/28/12 . chapter 9
Please continue this as soon as possible. Love it so far!