Ohh, that was so sad...I felt so bad for Dearka, and some part of me really wanted to kill Yzak, but I couldn't possibly, I love him too much xD Well-written and gracefully, emotionally executed.

:)Bee

If this is really gonna happen anytime,I think I'd cry till my eyes dry out. All in all, this one-shot captured every piece of angst and the heartbreak very well.

'His hoarse whisper melted into the stale air that filled his office.

“I love you, more than you could ever know.”

Was nearly choking at the end of it... But then again, there is still email, video n cellphone right??... (hopeful sparkling eyes)

uh. I'm not exactly a yaoi fan... so yeah...

but I read your work anyway because I was caught by your summary.

I've been waiting for a fic like this for a long time... I mean, with the whole 'you have to let him go' concept. I find those kind of drama real awesome.

On to review, I will be a honest reviewer and say that I think this is a nice fiction. It's simple, easy to read and was able to show what needed shown. I will say it again-- that I am not a fan of yaoi so I was cringing a little when Dearka and Yzak got mushy... but overall still, this fic managed to touch my heart.

Thank you for the read.
~Kkornelia

I HAVEN'T READ ANY SEED FICS FROM YOU IN SUCH A LONG TIME! AUGH! *spins you around and smooches you* THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!

I like the idea that Dearka has a voice that never sounds 100% serious no matter what. Dude, first paragraph and you already have me grinning over your writing.

Ooh, ouch. Wow, Yzak is being so harsh and cold, and Dearka is so pissed. This is almost scary to see; you're right, not a lot of people think to write about the bad side of a relationship, or the break-up. It's heartbreaking to read, but I like how you've done it.

"Yzak felt the knot in his stomach become tighter. It was never meant to end this way. Never." AUGH! Lines that like that make it hurt so much more to read! And that Yzak tries so hard not to return Dearka's embrace... OH, YZAK - WHY?!

“And I would die for you.” Okay, that's it. This fic is killing me. I mean, I understand why Yzak thinks he has to break it off, but IT HURTS SO MUCH TO READ. Yzak I know you're doing it because you love Dearka, but still, why do you insist on giving up before it's over? (Actually... I have no right to lecture Yzak Joule. I'd do the same thing that he's doing now, if it came right down to it and I loved someone that much but couldn't meet their needs.)

"It was just so ironic that Dearka was the one shouting and he was calm." Yeah, I noticed that too. I think that's part of what made this so scary to read at the beginning.

Okay, that's it. With that "passing phase" part... I think you're going to make me die crying, over here.

That "yes, commander?" AH! IT'S SO INTENSE AND HORRIFYING! NO, DEARKA! NO!

Wow, okay, and I did just start crying. At the end there when they were thanking each other all professionally and stuff. Screw you, I can't believe you just made me cry. I think I must have been turned into more of a sap since the last time I read any of your stuff. What's it been - over a year by now? Yeah, life has gotten to me for sure and I've changed, as a person, as a writer, as a reviewer. And I'm sure it also has something to do with how right now I'M also writing the first Dearka/Yzak fic in a long while. I think maybe it's been about as long for BOTH of us. And we started writing them again at the same time? Whoa. Wierd. BUT ALSO AWESOME.

This fic was great. Terrifically painful to experience, but that just means that you wrote it well. Nicely done, my friend, and I hope you'll plan to write some more in the near future. XD