Hee hee...public Yami x yugi yaoi sex? COUNT ME IN! Lolz Love the ending. I will treasure this forever and ever by...(drumroll)...FAVORITING IT! XD

Why cute, innocent Ryou! You monster!

Seems the pics fast for my liking...oh well! I will stick with it! XD

"That can easily be arranged!" ...HAHAHAHA Too good!

Hikari: Wait what the...
Seiji: Omr...
Hikari: WEIRD BUT INTERESTING OH AND WEIRD IN A GOOD WAY!
Seiji: Yup.

Hikari: *Giggles and glomps whoever wrote this* YOU MADE MY DAY!
Seiji: *Sighs* Okay okay they know
Seiji and Hikari: Great story.
Hikari: YUP *Nuzzles the writer* Omg I FREAKING LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!
Seiji: You said that to the teacher who gave you candy
Hikari: YUP!

That was incredibly beautiful! ;w;

Cheesy beyond all belief, but wonderful nonetheless!

I absolutely loved the way you had Tristan and Joey meet Yugi! XD I can so picture them being all bad-ass like that!

And Yugi being the silver angel, I so say they one coming the moment the darkness mentioned it, but it was still wicked seeing (well, reading but when I get truly engrossed into a story it started seeming like I'm watching a show rather then reading a story) him become that legendary spirit beast!

And his full Angel of Light/Hope form was surer beautiful!

I know this is a long-shot, but... If there's every a time, do you think you could possible make a sequel with like Mai, Seto, Marik, Rex, Weevil, etc. and base it on Yugi getting pregnant (MPreg-ish) seeing as he's not truly human it could so be possible and work based on the story here to back it up!

Nevertheless, outstanding story, cheesy and all! X3

wait so Yami doesnt have a dick nor a pussy

This is a pretty good story. I thought it moved a bit too fast but I think I understand why. I liked the fact the Yugi got to top kind of. This story reminds me of Fate/Stay Night a little bit. The similarities I see are: the symbol on the hand and the whole partern concept. While I think there's probably room for improvement, this is still a good story and it is definitely worth reading. Thank you for writing this, it is very enjoyable.

ok im going to make this short and sweet... it might have been a short story but it was AWESOME! PLZ WRITE MORE! THE STORY IS AWESOME!CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR STUFF!

Amazing! Yami seems to be a succubu :P

cool story! keep going this is getting good and yugi geting a one up on joey and Tristan that's a first, in any case up date soon please!

Please keep updating! This is a great story!

Cute story! conti please