 Miss Enthusiasimal 11/2/09 . chapter 1...SWINE FLU... cool I like the idea of him getting swine flu |
 jpfan1 9/1/09 . chapter 1At the end i thought it was kinda funny great story |
 newgal 8/22/09 . chapter 1Swine flu, oh no. No wonder he fell in the trash! |
 PattyB 8/20/09 . chapter 1Sue you? Wouldn't think of it, too clever.
I do believe you've come up with the ultimate Don whump. Poor guy, wonder if he broke a mirror, walked
under a ladder or just ignored that black cat crossing
his path. :D
Even though I don't know Rinkle, I'm sending Happy Birthday wishes her way, late or not. Hope her day
was a really good one. |
 Rinne 8/20/09 . chapter 1My little story. Thought I'd review over here as well.
You really do know me too well. I've reread it a number of times now. |
 w0413h 8/20/09 . chapter 1Keep it up. It is a good story so far. Don Whumping to continued I hope. {smile} |
 CD57 8/20/09 . chapter 1oh, not sueing you for writing a fic without a plot. Kuddos for letting us read in, despite that's not our birthdays.
Can you do one for me as well?:begs with puppy-dog eyes
Corine |
 Celena Caine 8/19/09 . chapter 1The irony in this story had me rolling on the floor. Well done. |
 phantom-jedi1 8/19/09 . chapter 1Yeowch! That's a nasty day indeed. Haven't watched Numb3rs in over a year, but I could so see him trying to come in even when sick.
Phantom Jedi |
 Ms.GrahamCracker 8/19/09 . chapter 1Yeah, okay, so it's whump without plot but you write hurt/Don so deliciously, it really doesn't matter. Besides, it's worth it for the image of him lying in the garbage, leaning into Liz's embrace, worried about Robin finding out. That would top his day off just fine, wouldn't it?
Thanks for the enjoyable read. |
 epalladino 8/19/09 . chapter 1Very little plot, sure, but it was so well written. Poor Don. Thanks, Beth |