idea good, tragicness level, good, i'm not cause you killed pikachu, i'm mad cause you made it too short!

Aw! That was so sad! Brilliant work!! *U* I, too, have wondered about a Pokemon's life span... ^U^ *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749

You know, if you extended this into an actual story, it could be really good. But poor Pikachu T-T

Way too short! But good nonetheless.

Nice, I like how you deal with the issue of pokemon dying like pets do.

I never thought about it before... Poor Ash.

I also like that you kept it really short, just a quick peak at the moment of realization and then we're gone. It was definitly enough.