A facinating piece. Well written, flows smoothly and I actually reached the bottom and proclaimed "ah" where's more?
So I am looking forward to if and when you continue forward with this.
Thanks for sharing, I just love great story approaches.
-dlsky

That was really good, you should definitely continue.

I think you should expand it because it's really good

AH! more..more.. please hurry up!

Wow! A very well written start to an interesting story. Lots of powerful emotions in this one and the setting is good too.

Good Luck writing this story.

Great story! I'd be interested in more, but it also stands well alone. :)

-Wings

The best Luke and Vader story I've ever read - this would be amazing as a series, but also brilliant as stand alone. Thank you for this, you are very talented.

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Gorgeous, gorgeous little piece. I can see this fitting into canon perfectly. Love your style/voice and hope to see this expanded!

The only criticism I can give is that you might want to be careful about overusing ellipses. I know they're addictive because I use them a lot too xD;

Spectacular! Thank you for a wonderful fic.

Good, but you rendered the characters in a bit too oblique a fashion. The conversations, while enjoyable, are not appropriate for Luke. His manner is not nearly as developed at that. Good job though. Enjoyable read.

Aw, Luke and his daddy bonding. Seriously, I loved the set up of this, the tension with waiting for Vader to show up, Luke dropping the wine glass and Wedge failing to catch it...stellar stuff.

Really good, thus far. Please continue!
Keeper-of-the-Cheese

Hello!
That was good, keep up the wonderful work and post more.

Cassy

I like this so far. Hope you make it into a full length story.

Very GOOD.