Nicely done, Twin, nicely done indeed. I really enjoyed reading these stories, and I look forward to reading more by you.

this was a great chapter-- I loved seeing the sauske/karin relationship, and I now have a hankering for some good fanfiction regarding the two. (since in cannon, he's still too much of an asshole to garner any sympathy from me.)

Naruto was very...mature. It was nice, but I almost wish we'd gotten to see sasuke rub his new team in Naruto's face, if only to see some good naru/sasu reactions.

and these genin are awesome-- I can't wait to see more of them!

yes- I wish this one was a little longer, but I like it a lot. Haha, poor konohamaru doesn't know he's about to get saddled with a terrible threesome.

I like this one a lot-- is hakukaji a spawn of any cannon characters?

daw indeed. just the right amount of fluff in this one-- I do wish we'd get a Naruto-centered one though...but that's probably just me being greedy. ;)

f- these are getting better exponentially. I really enjoyed this one-- and I for one think you caught older sakura perfectly. Tsubaki seems like an awesome character, and I hope she doesn't get sidelined in favor of Minoru and his story (since I vaguely remember you saying his was the main focus of your comic.)

well I gotta say--so far, this one is my favorite. It's nice to get some really good introspection from one of the characters, and she'd definitely a great one to get the introspection from.

a mix of sakura and Karin? sounds interesting. :)

you know, the inner-fanboy I have desperately wants to know how Shuu's parents landed themselves in the Naruto world (did kubo tite lose a bet?) but I understand that it's not immediately relevant to the narrative, and thus I'll sit quietly and go over every little detail with a fine-toothed comb, hoping to see something that'll give me a hint of an answer.

it's great to see that these characters aren't just black and white-- they have very realistic and human (or perhaps not to human, in shuu's case.) flaws, and that's the first sign of a good, fleshed out character and story.

a great start to the drabbles-- it's good to see these characters finally coming to life.

though I do wonder-- who was the 7 and 8th hokages, if Minoru ended up the 9th?

So sad that they lose Sasuke and Karin. Especially when that team has no one. :( Great job. I like the welcome to the family bit.

Oh he's not white haired, wrinkly Naruto yet... But I'm sure he feel that way. :) Nice drabble.

I'm definitely curious about Haku. He makes me think of Jiraiya but a bit more on the logical side. Can't wait to read that doujin.

I loved this one, very sweet and touching... Rinji and Sasuke are very stubborn males. I have to wonder, did Naruto try and sneak back in to the hospital to see his infant daughter? I like that Sakura was pleased on the eyes.

Tsubaki reminds me more of Itachi than Sasuke. Itachi was the resolute protector of Sasuke, making him strong, even if it was to kill him. Given how you've written Tsubaki, I can see her willing to do just that here. As far as characterization goes, I can understand the whole need to kill your enemies before they can become stronger. I also like the dynamics between Tsubaki and Itomura, I think I remember you doing an art work of these two together. It's nice to see how it all began.