easy! update! this is rather interesting. I take it Midnight's dream was about her connection to Bran? She knows something is wrong? yep. interesting. Bran's my favorite character so it will be interesting to hear the history between him and Midnight. I like the tie-in with Warren as well. :) Update... this is your conscious... Bran wants you to update!

maybe middy and leah should be old friends and bran might not like her? but he might like sydney? idk its an idea :-)
i think this is awesome tho. seriously if you made a who;e story it would be like a new thing of patricias books but from a different point of view...
anyway this is awsome!

Oh you have to write more! I want to know what happens! Cool story so far :)

Ah! You have to update...or I will just die from curiosity!! Such a good story! I'm hooked! Please update! Love it!

-lionandthelamblove7

Nicely written... good so far... but you tempt me with that cliffhanger... you will get nothing more from me until you give up another chapter my dear! Muua HA HA! :-)