Holy crudfudges. That was pretty much what I`d catergorize as...amazing. Frekin amazing. It made me cry. You are awesome.

Keep making me cry!

I love you. ^_^

Rose

i love it

it is so sad

why is it you always make me want to cry either from sadness or from happiness??! I loved this, it was a bit morbid but thats ok

aw. :'( short but has a twist! nice job.

Great job!

wow love the emotion packed into this story :(

I was just talking to someone the other day about how long it had been since you posted anything, and how much I was needing some awesome E/B/C threesomes.
Um, not to be a tard about this piece, but was it Edward and Bella's spirits watching Carlisle?

i thought it was carlisle you were talking about ,not bella and edward

Interesting... It sounds good! XD

that was sad but i loved it

That made me cry yet I didn't fully understand it lol

Aw! Very sad but wonderfully written. Carlisle is my favorite character and I can see this happening if he ever lost any member of his family. Wonderful job!

I liked this, I would advise you to expand on it though!
Good work.
Please r&r my own stories too.
Thanks


xoxM'N'Mxox

Great one-shot...i like how ur mind works ;)

Very beautiful and tragic! Its good to see you writing agian!