  Dementia 1/27/01 . chapter 1 Twisted...thats all I'm saying...Twisted. |
| Kc 9/27/00 . chapter 1 Ending sucks |
 CINCGREEN 9/23/00 . chapter 1What devotees? |
| xiana 9/11/00 . chapter 1 you-you-you...butchered 'fight club'! you evil person. evil, evil. good story, though. decent. |
| annabelle 9/8/00 . chapter 1 this is o.k |
| megan 8/23/00 . chapter 1 cute. |
| Grifter 8/22/00 . chapter 1 Overall, not bad as a parody of "Fight Club(the whole Brittany/Meat Loaf thing was brilliant!
But the ending is a total cop-out! If you hadn't seen the ending to "Fight Club", couldn't you have maybe rented the movie again, seen the ending, and then finished the story? Were you in some kind of hurry? |
| Nome de Plume 8/9/00 . chapter 1 wow. |
| Nome de Plume 8/8/00 . chapter 1 Oh, not death could keep me from reading part 5 now. |
| CINCGREEN 8/7/00 . chapter 1 Grading this on a scale of one to ten, I'd throw out the scale,
the fanfic, and the author. Nice idea, which wore out its welcome
with part one. It was, however, typed very nicely and some of
the grammar was correct. Also, it was short. |
| ssd 8/7/00 . chapter 1 ummmm... |
| Chris Parra 8/6/00 . chapter 1 Another great story! Can you keep this up? God, I sure hope so. |
| Nome de Plume 8/6/00 . chapter 1 You catch the essence of the movie, Fight Club, incredibly well in this one. Good work. |
| Chris Parra 8/5/00 . chapter 1 ROTFLMAO! Can hardly wait to see what happens in part three! |
| ssd 8/5/00 . chapter 1 huh who is who plz verify this |
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