|Reviews for Director's Chair|
| Shay 3/19/12 . chapter 4
Wow. Just... Wow. Simply amazing. The amount of delineation in your work is outstanding! The imagery just melts into my mind.. It's so absolute, and described so efficiently, I barely have to use my imagination at all - you already make it so wonderfully patent in your writing
Definitely, absolutely, and unquestionably one of the best works of writing I've ever come upon in a fanfiction(or, anywhere, really!). You've got some real talent.. Ever thought of becoming an author? I'm sure you'd excel.
As for constructive criticism, I really don't have anything to contribute - I feel the writing itself is already so well put-together, I don't have anything to add that could possibly make it any better than it already is.
Except for: Keep Writing!
I'd love to read more of what you have to offer, and I'm sure you'd be doing many - including myself - a fantastic favor
P.S. I love how you incorporated a past guest[Marilyn(from Season Two of the show)] into the story. It added an unexpected(and pleasant) thickness to the character set-up
I also very much adore how you took the characters, the ideals, and the events of "Gregory Horror Show", but gave your own twists - so as to give the story familiarity to the original show, but still keeping readers on our toes and at the edges of our seats
Like I said, my best bit of advice: Keep Writing
And keep up the good work! I look forward to more from you in the future. :) 'Til then, I'll be pleasantly awaiting for more sweet, sweet mind-candy
| DetectiveM 9/5/09 . chapter 4
Ho no! it is the lost Doll! run!
| Santoryuu 8/28/09 . chapter 4
Nice work show casing the gallery of characters in this chapter. Especially Hell Chef.
And now there is Lost Doll. Things just keep going from bad to worse for this guy, huh? But then, that's often the way in Gregory House.
| Santoryuu 8/21/09 . chapter 2
A rather interesting story. Guess even celebrities have their hang ups, and I have a (well informed) guess as to where this Marilyn comes from.
In terms of constructive criticism, I'd say watch the characterization a wee bit, especially regarding Karen and Chef's relationship. It felt less "one sided" than it usually is on the show.
Other than that, keep up the good work.