Hey
I always prefered Lucy to Susan. Susan has her looks of "knowing-everything" that I don't really like if she was Hermione, I would have forgiven, but we aren't in Harry Potter series And Lucy is the child you hope you were when little. The child with such emotions and stars in his eyes when he's so delighted. I'm quite happy to myself that I always have got this feeling for some things.
Some times, I feels like Lucy... :P

Good continuation and see you soon !

Goutt2mer

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Lovely one shot, I think it is so true, Lucy looks at Narnia as home. I would too if I were her. Very beautifully worded.

England would seem alien and foreign after being in such a magical place.

Nice job.