i love it! thus perished lord voldemort.

I just want to point out some... mistake in this chapter if you will... when it comes to addressing nobility in medieval time, the females are addressed as "Lady" not "Sir", therefore for the case of Cho Chang its not supposed to be "Sir Cho Chang" but "Lady Cho Chang"

The only thing that ruined this amazingly awesome story was the over-use of exclamation points I kept reading it in a voice of fake shock. Otherwise, fantastic story!

Aw! loved it! really exiting!

Youre story is amazing.

I mean, I know what its like to have know parents...
should be no, not know!

"What do you do hear Hagrid?" she asked.

should be here, not hear!

when you're describing the armor here, shoulder coverings are called 'spaulders
just trying to help.

wonderful beginning!

I like it)

loved it! i hope you continue writing stories like this one! It's very original and takes a lot of creativity! D

well written

Wow! That was a great story, it kept me on the edge of my seat to the very end. It was also very interesting the way you incorporated the characters of the novels into your setting I loved the interaction between Hermione and Harry as well, though I was hoping for some Malfoy/Ginny action, but you can't have it all.

Anyway if you are still around and still reading reviews from this story Great Work!

this is your story so you write it the way you want, i know that, and this isnt a huge things, but lady knights should be called "lady" example: Lady Cho Chang Of tbe Kingdom Of Ravenclaw...something like that...but Sir works too...just sounds a bit funny...real good story so far though, original deffinately lol

I loved it! I was kinda dissappointed that I didn't start reaing it earlier. You're very good at writing.