I loved this story from beginning to end! I love the way you made Duncan and Courtney pure polar opposites and the confusion of why they were taken faster and kept longer at the white room then anyone else!

I'm also a HUGE fan of Xmen and I thought it was great that you tied the stories in together! Also I LOVE how the characters match the original shows but you were still able to add more of an edge to match their amazing and unique powers!

I'm a huge fan of Duncan and I love it when he is a major character and how most depend on him! And the fighting throughout the story was creative! Can't wait to read the sequel!

Well, I guess if anybody had to die, may as well make it interesting. Very nice.

Just a couple of things. 1. I wish you would've explained what "that guy's" power was. 2. You forgot to mention DJ, if he's with the team or Ms. Watson. Other than that pretty good.

Remember earlier when I accused Noah of being the controller? Well I forgot about Ms. Watson's power too.

This chapter is so sweet. I like it. BTW, I expected Duncan, Lindsay, and Noah's powers. And as if nobody knows that the mind-controller is Noah. I never trusted that guy to begin with.

I like this story, but just copying an episode for a chapter just seems lazy to me.

I love how you gave Ezekiel his own chapter (he's my favorite), and I really like what you did with it! Major story development and their first real test as "heroes."

I'm liking this. This is starting to be just like Sky High. I like that movie.

you should put sierra and alahondro from season 3 in this story

Katie was birthday is my birthday just not the same year!

UR LIKE SO AWESOME! I LOVE IT xD

Sorry I was late reviewing for the last two chapters. I can't believe I'm saying this but Heather please don't go to the bad side!

How could Duncan and Courtney turn like that?

I love the secound season. I can't wait for Izzy's prov.

awwwe DxC moment :)