 MK08 2009-11-28 . chapter 16Interesting take on Frieza! You don't really get too many of these. I liked it :) |
 MK08 2009-11-24 . chapter 15I loved this one! Piccolo is my absolute favorite and his devotion to Gohan is adorable. Awesome description regarding the whole 3 souls in 1 body thing!
I look forward to more of these! :) |
 Aosugiru Sora 2009-11-21 . chapter 14Your words ring with truth. You do both Piccolo and Gohan justice with this piece. :)
~Sora |
 J.W. Appel 2009-11-16 . chapter 14 You should do a Bulma/trunks bonding one. |
 Ron'sBella 2009-10-30 . chapter 13Sniff. Lovely chapter. Well done! Keep up the good work! :) |
 A Nony Mouse 2009-10-26 . chapter 12 I loved this! It was really terrific. I love these one shots, your whole series is great. Please write more, more, more!
Please do one with Krillin soon. And what about when Vegeta learns Bulma's pregnant with Trunks? Please keep writing these, no matter what themes you do. They are great |
 Tatsumaki-sama 2009-10-04 . chapter 11I just want to give Gohan a hug here. After everything that he's been through, especially at his age, fighting in several life-or-death battles, seeing his friends being killed, almost being killed himself, he's still such a nice boy and he was able to move on from those experiences. |
 Aosugiru Sora 2009-10-04 . chapter 11It's sad that Gohan can never tell the world what REALLY makes him afraid. It's a hero's burden, I guess. A wonderful collection, and I can't wait for more. ^^ |
 Mister Unsmiley 2009-09-24 . chapter 9I LOVE this story. You get inside the character's head and express things the series never could! For what it's worth, you deserve a lot more attention than you get. |
 hopelessly_demented 2009-09-24 . chapter 9 Your insights into the character's state of mind are pretty good. I particularly love the ones about Vegeta. I think it's pretty hard to put into words the things that go through that proud Saiyan mind of his. |
 gizmo-gal 2009-09-24 . chapter 9Yep, I loved it. LOVED IT! This was good. Do some for Bulma and Vegeta please, and Gohan and Vegeta too. Oh, and please one for Dende. |
 Mirai Veggie 2009-09-23 . chapter 9Ahh... Love it!
Please update soon, =] |
 Mirai Veggie 2009-09-23 . chapter 8Beautifully written. =] |
 Mirai Veggie 2009-09-23 . chapter 7Gotta love the ending! |
 Mirai Veggie 2009-09-23 . chapter 4I love this chappie! |