I love that you've wrote about how max would feels about losing zack please write more I've always hated how he was writen out

i like it! ive always hated that they basically cut out zack in such a pathetic manor. add more soon!

I think this is a great start to a story. I totally see the 'peace' thing with Zack at the end of SAR.

I really wanna see where you take this story so please keep writing!