aw completely awesome story, my friend! Big congrats to you! *biggrin)

fab really enjoyed it!

hope you get a chance to write more TW soon

thanks for sharing

xLx

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Even though he did get hurt, I think your treatment of Mr Jones was much better than COE's. I really like the idea of the Agniton and how they work. Very interesting.

It's over
Great story indeed though! Loved the Janto (i squeeled like a fan girl..)And here is to you Mr. Jones!
Looking forward to see what you have in store for us.

Ooh, another cliffhanger! Don't let them bleed too long, they might exsanguinate! Very good interaction between the characters and the Agniton, and nice descriptions of nasty injuries. Looking forward to the ultimate chapter.

It's almost over?
Anyways great chapter!

But another cliffhanger? What happened to the Welshman?
I'll just have to see during the next update!

I hope that Ianto does something brave and clever soon! The others and the rest of the planet are running short of options. Good chapter!

Oh, no!

Not Jack and Gwen and Ianto!

Update soon! xx

whoa-intense chapter and another evil cliffhanger! That was amazing, the agniton are just plain evil! Oh, i'm on the edge of my seat, again! X

OMG!
Please update soon!

Ooh, a cliffhanger, indeed! Don't leave them too long without a plan my fingers are getting tired from hanging on this cliff!

Another awesome chapter!

Is it just me or are cliffhangers getting popular?
Update soon! xx

PLEASE update soon!
The suspense O.O

whoa-dude, that was one mean cliffhanger
poor Jack really needs to get up to date wit his television, doesn't he? Who cannot know Scooby doo?
Another incredible chapter, the suspense is amazingly cruel!

what a lovely cliffhanger! *pouts
nice banter between the three of them)