Umm... Why the heck would Legolas describe his own eyes as green and sparkling? Overlooking that his eyes in the movie were actually blue, if you are writing movie verse, why the heck would he refer to the color and sparkliness of his eyes at all? Do you think about how your eyes look like when you are talking to someone, or did you mean to emphasize that Legolas looks into the mirror all the time and I mean ALL the time and thinks 'Oh, my eyes are so green and sparkling'?*Looks disturbed
You obviously need some practice with POV...

Gimly read Legolas' diary? Legolas had a diary? O.o geez, where this world will end up? ... hahahahahaha! kidding! but, sure, it surprised me. I liked very much this fic. but, truly, I thought the elf would be more broken because of what Boromir did to him. nah, it's great how it is

Teriffic job! I really dont like Boromir (which is why i was attracted to this story!) but I am glad he was sorry for what he did. Aww! Aragorn and Legolas are too cute! LOL I love Gimli!

Squee!

That was beautemous!

Hey...uh, I know this is a lot to ask...but will you read my story, "Devils and Desires?" Please? I mean...you know...bleack...

*applause* That was sweet. good job yo. Peace.
-Heidi

You canon-raping bitch! Read the books!

I love this fic. It didn't doddle on emotions too much, but it had enough to make it valid. The bantering between Gimli and the others was great. I always love to see that. I'm going to add you to my favorite list and check out what else you've done.

Uggh, ANOTHER Boromir rapes/coerces Legolas fic. He wouldn't do that. I've been quite a slash fan for a while now, but please at least *attempt* to keep Tolkien's characters in character.

same night, sorry i just read your former reviews and I would like to salute Lady Galadra or whatever her name is for standing so staunchly against this story. It honestly seems to be written as some personal fantasy that you have written out so that others can partake in it. So lady Galadra there is another out here that agrees. three cheers

Well...
This is after your second chapter, and since you probably aren't thinking about taking this down any time soon, I thought I might offer some suggestions on the story,-you might want to make the story more on canon, it's totally movie-based and kinda strange, Boromir is totally perverted and way off of what the movie and book portrayed, I've read Boromir-bashing stories but none this bad
-who are the dwarves who were leading them in the first chapter? I totally didn't get that
-you probably should add some more description to the story, it's mostly dialogue and there isn't much description of where they are
-also in middle-earth there is a common tongue, but it isn't english, so you probably should change the mention of switching to english in the first chapter
-Also the part mentioning Galadriel in Rivendell? I think you meant Lothlorien...
-And finally, since Tolkien based their cultures on a highly less developed versions of europeans I doubt they had shampoo/liquid soap developed yet, and for one so rough as aragorn I doubt he had it just lying around
I'm sorry if this seemed very harsh but I endeavor to help people on this website write to their best abilities, this doesn't seem like yours.

it me again that was cool u have a gift

i thougth that this was a really good verison pf lord of the ring i would of never of read this if it was thanks to my friend lauren who u know

Ok first of all, Lady-Gadara shut the#!$ up! You got a warning yet you read! Read what I say in my Bio! I stick by that! And to AJ good story! I want you to continue please!

v. good, please write more soon!

I loved this! Legolas and Aragorn are so sweet together!