I really think this story should be longer. You did a great job with both versions.

I loved the story!

I really enjoyed both of your stranger series. I hope to see many more like them, for you are excellent at writing the emotions well.

THE END! WHAT! You can't end it here! It was just getting good!

Not bad dude.
Very nice, but it leaves questions...like how does a ring of power and Legolas connect, since the mob couldn't have known Legolas by sight. How did the angry mob find him in the first place. I don't think Legolas would have wandered somewhere that is traveled by a mob of people in the dark of night. Why was there a mob traveling in the night.
Aragorn's story line sounded pretty solid.

Elrond calls him 'silly'?
So does this mean, Arwen hasn't spoken with Aragorn about any possible emotional entanglements as of yet?

Nice story, I'll have to see if you have written more later.

Ah...sweet and innocent young love...wish I had some of that...anyhow. Your story's really good (as usual) Please write more. However, Aragorn and Legolas *sighs dreamily* seem childlike in their love, but that's a good thing...makes their love more pure and seems stronger to me. But I wish more familiar characters were in here though...Write on!

Omg, dat was soo good (NOT), I just want to say to all you A/L fans and fanfic makers, FUCK Ya'LL!

BITCH! SICK ASSHOLES!

heh, nakie as the day the good earth made them,eh? well IM haveing good thoughts...

Elendor

xxx

hey, i rly like ur stories, but i agree w/ another review in here.

u shouldn't skip through the story like you do. it feels like im missing things in between because its moving so quickly.

also, i rly like how you portrayed Aragorn, but u made Legolas sound like a complete otkast, which, i cansee how u got that impression, but i think u overdid it.

in this story he seems so weak and scared of everything, instead of the blood thirsty son of a b he rly is. lol. but other than that, i enjoyed reading it!(harlan*

I've read both of your Stranger series. Though I like that the alternate version is factually correct, I enjoyed the first version more. I can't wait to read the sequel next. Keep writing your fanfics...all of them are very good, some of the best I've read so far. Thank You...

This is really a review for like, all your stories! They're all so sweet and convincingly written. I think you like all the couplings and fandoms I do, which is really cool (and rare!) Keep writing!

I don't normally take for slash, but this was very well writen.

Ivy

it's good to know that legolas did not commit suicide in that fic, mariko, for i honestly thought he had. *sighs in relief*

i love how you did two versions of this series. i also wanted to respond to your comment on my "In Dreams" fic- Legolas didn't commit suicide, he died of a broken heart. mayhap i should clarify that...

You won't mind me saying so, but everything flies by way too fast. Still, what a absolutely funny and interesting story! Heehee... *LOL* The ending was my fav. part. Um, just onee thing. Don't bring in the romance so sharply and suddenly. It doesn't quite fit...good work!