 renisanz 2009-08-21 . chapter 1Aw...I like the way you wrote this, and admittedly, I immediately read this because I saw your name, and it's cool to have a familiar author in this new fandom.
Pete and Myka have a very interesting relationship. I like that the show plays up their friendship more than anything else, and I also like that this is reflected in a lot of the fanfic I've read for them so far, with yours now included. The images of them dancing in the garden was nice and chill, and it fit's Pete's character to pay attention to Myka's need in that way. Good stuff. :) |