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Rebakah
2/5/12 . chapter 28
Congrats on a job amazingly well done. This is the most realistic presentation of a Snape/Hermione relationship I've ever seen with her still being a student because it wasn't creepy at all.

You kept me checking the dictionary.

I love the Ron in your story. You managed to let him grow up and still retain his personality. I don't think I've ever seen a story where Ron easily approves. Of course you've made me hate Harry but I guess u couldn't make everyone perfect.

I'm assuming you've abandoned this story but just in case I'm putting in on alerts on the hope that one day you'll come back and finish.
Wildfly
12/31/11 . chapter 17
finally, breakthrough!

and you also one of the few people here who write in english, possess (or possessed by) a spectacular sense of humour and drama... what more a reader can ask? plot? well, maybe, but it's still one of the best and i am trapped till i finished reading it all.
Wildfly
12/31/11 . chapter 12
tiberius never was my favourite :(
TrueBlackRoses
12/11/11 . chapter 28
Please continue writing this story, it's so good it'll be a real shame if you don't finish it. I so loved it, read it all in one day.

I hope you'll decide to keep writing it, don't let a great story go to waste please!

I'll be on the look out for the possibility of you to make a little reader a lot happier!
Fangirl3001
11/4/11 . chapter 28
I'm sorry for my last review. It was rude of me to talk like that, but the story is so good that i couln't help it. Thank you for writing it so far and please continue! ^^
mudpuddledemon
11/4/11 . chapter 27
I thought this was looking familiar. And lo and behold my reviews from a year and a half ago. Like bumping into an old friend unexpectedly. I wanted to add how much I enjoyed your Ron, he's often a character I'm not at all fond of, but you gave him excellent depth. Also, while a year and a half ago I seem to have made peace with the end, or lack there of, it came as a bit of a shock this time, I think because my wee brain just assumed that since I'd already read this that there must be an ending and I was speeding my way toward it with glee. But not so. Prease? Prease more?
mudpuddledemon
11/2/11 . chapter 1
"while trying not to notice that the bane of his Potions class had developed breasts." 3

I was worried you were going to drag this out, I'm glad it was quick. And I love how he handled it. Well done!
Fangirl3001
11/1/11 . chapter 19
Awww. I had been reading for more than 3 hours and then i saw that this story hasn't been updated since 2005! I totally lost the will to continue reading...For today at least. I just can't believe i actually thought this story was completed and i was looking forward to the end. *cries*

Oh well, this is very good, thank you for writing and PLEASE continue writing it! ^^
rickit
10/11/11 . chapter 1
Found this story recently - for 3 days could barely tear myself away from the screen. Your take on Hermione is perfect - exact right mix of caring, vulnerability and willpower. While an official ending would have been great, I am thankful that you have stuck with this story long enough to grant us a feel-good resolution to the central romance. I hope that eventually, whatever has made you abandon writing will pass, and you will share more of your talent.
Kimmerv2
10/4/11 . chapter 1
I'm new to this site - but I just wanted to say I really enjoyed the chapters ( I believe 28 at this time) of this story. I hope you come back and write more - I am hooked and want to see what happens next!
DragonRose4
9/16/11 . chapter 28
Re-reading again. Sad face for no updates in such a long time.

I hope you are well, whatever you are doing and I do hope someday you will come back to this and finish it off. You have taken this world and made it your own and it's so wonderful because you think of everything. You write real people who eat and sleep and have to visit the loo and it's not always pleasant but it is real. Okay I will end that here. Blessed be Kaz
Mandemi
9/3/11 . chapter 28
I've been re-reading this for the past couple of days. I wanted to express my encouragement for you to finish the story! I really want to know about the stag shirt Harry thinks he got from Mrs. Weasley!
Deusluxmea
8/30/11 . chapter 28
T-T no updates? Y DO U HATE ME!*sobs*
FatedMoon
8/29/11 . chapter 6
this is a fantastic story and i love how u shaped the characters to have a a kind of personality of their own instead of being there to solely talk about harry... i just have one question... why do u call flitwick march when his real name is filius? just curious... thanks!
Sniffles 55
8/15/11 . chapter 27
This is such a great story. It would be good of you to finish it for those of us still lurking around fanfiction even though you have clearly moved on.
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