Very nice. I liked how the characters where kept in character so well. I hope there is more to this story and that you continue. Below, in the reviews is an invitation to join or come to the yahoo group"When I Kissed the Teacher". I second it. Please come and join us. I think your writing would make a great addition there.

nice job. it is interesting to see Dumbledore showing more emotion and almost getting angry with Snape and Black makes him seem more human and less sage-like.

I love this! Oh, God, this is AWESOME! Poor Hermione! Oh, well, you are particularly good at insterting humor into this. I was laughing quite a bit (dunno if you meant readers to), especially when Dumbledore complained about Severus not being slapped enough. Very in character, and perfect. Again, I love this. Please write more soon.

Absolutely marvelous. Beautiful characterization and dialogue. Love the very subtle hints about both Hermione nad Severus noticing each other physically, course I'm a sucker for SS/HG. Really a striking piece.

Simply cannot wait for the next installment.

This is really astonishing work. I really, really enjoyed reading it. You've got Snapes character down really well and I like the way youve got Lupin back and Sirius in the school. Its origoanl and brilliant! Please, please, please write more I want to find yout what happens. It seems Mione is helping break down Snapes emotional barriers just like he did with her in his own unique way i might add lol. Hes such an evil bastard when he wants to be but when he said "Oh, child" I was like ooooo Snape you bit softie. Hes all nice and squishy on the inside I know he is, and I hope we get to see more of it but obviously keeping him in character Luv it loads, moremoremore!

Very nice job characterizing Snape. I like how you put his bastard-ish side to good use. Interesting to see how this will continue...

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Intriguing start, have to feel for Hermione and that whole set up with Dumbledore having Snape break through her shell was inspired. Can't wait to read more.)

Oooh! An excellent beginning! You've got Snape down perfectly, as well as Dumbledore. It was totally believable that Hermione would bottle up her grief unless forced into a situation where she had to let it out, and you wrote that beautifully.

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What a beauty! Wonderful work.

Egads! I love this story. Snape stays so IC, and so does Hermione. It is extremely well written... I only wish Snape in my story was as... Snapeish as he is in yours... aghh, what am I saying? Oh yeah, great, terrific, wonderful story and my favorite line is"...while trying not to notice that the bane of his Potions class had developed breasts.
_ Keep writing!

Long live Snapey-Wapey!

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