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Qismat Qami
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
Sexy and hot as hell!
Lizz2795
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
awesome!
Kiseki_nKoi
2009-10-22 . chapter 1
ah *w*!!
I love your fics!
I love your writing style.
Your fics have love, hate, sex and a great story,especially "Of Kings and Pawns" and "Of God and Kings"... are the best fics I've read >w<!!
¡¡Congratulations, you're so talented!!
Stoic-Genius
2009-10-20 . chapter 1
I love this pairing.

This was a nice chapter! I hope you write another fic or oneshot with these two again.


As far as the ending goes, I say I'd love for Schneizel to win, however it would be nice if Lelouch one at the same time. Something like Schneizel wins but that turns out to be a good thing for Lulu.
riceandXDs
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
again, authentic characters, and i like the unfolding plot.
well...
a **...blindfolding, gagging, and etc.
I would like to have Schneizel win, that would be so hot!
(not like it already isn't)

update soon!
Tsuki the Ryuujin no Miko
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
what if you included some chess pieces into the smut? update soon please!
RikoJasmine
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Hm, I've read this repeatedly, but never got around to reviewing... Sorry! Too distracted by the "brotherly love". I just love this pairing so much! Your stories are what got me hooked on it in the first place. You're an awesome writer!

I would like to see Schneizel win, personally. :)
BlueOctoberSky
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
As much as I love Lelouch, I also love it when he loses.
Diana Prince
2009-08-26 . chapter 1
Very nice love this so far I will wait for Of Gods and Kings though. Can't wait to read more of this budding story thanks for writing it.
showmaster64x
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
oh the possibilities...Schneizel should win of course (Lelouch is such a naughty boy) but Lelouch should put up an admirable struggle. If i even had kinky suggestions for you, im sure that they would seem shallow and trite compared to your own. So good luck then and i wish a speedy end to your writer's block.
Gothic-Sakura-Blossom
2009-08-23 . chapter 1
Lovely <3
I would enjoy seeing Lelouch being the overall victor, but Schneizel should play with him somemore first ;)
2stupid
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
*brain fries*
deathxofxthexbetrayed
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
Awesome! I love this... please update soon! :D

I think Lulu should have the last word on this one... he should whisk away with some mysterious last line that leaves the satisfied and curious Schneizel wanting more from his little captured King... :)

Please, please, please! Update Higanbana, too! I love that story as well~
Lifewielder
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
It is a great fic and I enjoyed every bit of it :)

Well, if you don't mind I would like to give a little
suggestion.

What I find about most SchneizelxLelouch fics are that
Lelouch always come as a bit of a whiny little brother
who is so naive and innocent that he gets completely
fooled by Schneizel.

There is a little bit of a such side to Lelouch, but bringing that devious side of Lelouch seems like a nice change, I think.

So my opinion is that I would like to see more arrogant,
experienced, and cold side of Lelouch. For once, I would like
to see Lelouch as the victor. Or making it a draw wouldn't be bad, too.

That was just my opinion so you're free to use&ignore.

Thanks for sharing this fic!!
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