This is really, really good! Even though they probably broke up, I really liked it. And it's not very angsty as I thought it would be.

Did you make up that Ryan has dylesxia? (can't spell)

Keep Writing!

Beautiful poetry, sad story, well written and utterly, completely believable. Truly lovely.

LJ

Aww that's so sad...but strangely beautiful. The way you did the poem was so lovely. Sad story but wonderfully well written!

Great job!

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Whoa. That was surprisingly angsty. Very good, though. Awesome job. May GOD bless you!

Whoa, this story is really really sad. I guess it gives you an insight on what Kori and Richard's relationship. could be like...